Doodlebombs
Moms frustration shows at times.8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. We all have our favorite dishes we like to cook for our families. Those meals often end up with special made up names to amuse our families.
Merry Christmas to you and your family.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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A very well-written poem. We all have our favorite dishes we like to cook for our families. Those meals often end up with special made up names to amuse our families.
Merry Christmas to you and your family.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Thanks, Sandra Merry Christmas
Comment from Sugarray77
Cute poem. I did have trouble finding the rhythm. A good entry for the poetry contest. Good luck. Regards. I hope you have a great Christmas and New Year.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Cute poem. I did have trouble finding the rhythm. A good entry for the poetry contest. Good luck. Regards. I hope you have a great Christmas and New Year.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Thanks, Merry Christmas to you as well.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Shots! Shots?
Hahaha, dinner from a bottle, 'ey? There's a few members in my immediate family who often have those for dinner.
I prefer steak myself.
"Doodlebombs", huh? It sounds like a word a frustrated comic book illustrator might use.
"Dammit! Now I gotta start all over. This crap I've drawn is nothin' but Doodlebombs!"
Heh-heh-heh.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Shots! Shots?
Hahaha, dinner from a bottle, 'ey? There's a few members in my immediate family who often have those for dinner.
I prefer steak myself.
"Doodlebombs", huh? It sounds like a word a frustrated comic book illustrator might use.
"Dammit! Now I gotta start all over. This crap I've drawn is nothin' but Doodlebombs!"
Heh-heh-heh.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Thanks Dean lol
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from Dan Diego
I am reviewing this before voting in the contest. "Doodlebombs" is the word and filet mignon is the prize. Nice little entry. When asked what we were having dinner, my mom used to say, "Worms and Dirt." This reminded me of her.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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I am reviewing this before voting in the contest. "Doodlebombs" is the word and filet mignon is the prize. Nice little entry. When asked what we were having dinner, my mom used to say, "Worms and Dirt." This reminded me of her.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Lol thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun write about your favourite food which I have never heard of before and your made up word which made your Mum's face glow! Merry Christmas, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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A fun write about your favourite food which I have never heard of before and your made up word which made your Mum's face glow! Merry Christmas, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Thanks Dolly Merry Christmas to you as well
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Make up a Word' writing prompt.
It's a good one.
The picture is a good match as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Make up a Word' writing prompt.
It's a good one.
The picture is a good match as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Thanks Sharon
Comment from Cass Carlton
My neighbour used to answer "Bread 'nifit" when they asked her what was for tea.
Another of my acquaintance was less polite and would say "s**t on a shovel". When my kids came racing in to ask what I was cooking for tea I'd usually reply with something disgusting or revolting like "dead cat pie" or "pig's eyes stew." to which they would respond with every expression of pleasure. "Oh really! how yummy. Will the cat be defurred or do we have to chew it off like we did last time? " Their schoolmates were more than somewhat wary of accepting invitations to tea until they worked out the joke . My boys would say the most awful things with a totally deadpan expression and I'd be the one to give the game away with fits of laughter. This review is NOT about what the poem is about, but it did remind me of happy days from long ago. So please excuse me.
Cheers Cass
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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My neighbour used to answer "Bread 'nifit" when they asked her what was for tea.
Another of my acquaintance was less polite and would say "s**t on a shovel". When my kids came racing in to ask what I was cooking for tea I'd usually reply with something disgusting or revolting like "dead cat pie" or "pig's eyes stew." to which they would respond with every expression of pleasure. "Oh really! how yummy. Will the cat be defurred or do we have to chew it off like we did last time? " Their schoolmates were more than somewhat wary of accepting invitations to tea until they worked out the joke . My boys would say the most awful things with a totally deadpan expression and I'd be the one to give the game away with fits of laughter. This review is NOT about what the poem is about, but it did remind me of happy days from long ago. So please excuse me.
Cheers Cass
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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LOL thanks for you Comments
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The makeup of the word doodlebombs is well put in this poem in order with mom's frustration shows when something more is put with the same; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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The makeup of the word doodlebombs is well put in this poem in order with mom's frustration shows when something more is put with the same; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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Thanks a bunch! Merry Christmas
