Merry Christmas from Texas
A Christmas card to my FS Friends35 total reviews
Comment from Rasmine
Well, I see this as being a great poem with good beat, and lovely creativity.
The only thing I see is that you didn't put 's' on some of the multiple creatures. All in all this is awesome!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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Well, I see this as being a great poem with good beat, and lovely creativity.
The only thing I see is that you didn't put 's' on some of the multiple creatures. All in all this is awesome!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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I will go back and check and I thought I did, except for the ones that don't require an s. Thank you
Comment from SLMorrical
This was awesome and very creative I think. It made me laugh, and I don't know if it was suppose to. It flowed very well, and I feel very honored reviewing something from an accomplished novelist. I am just working on a book at this time. It is very obvious you have talent for writing.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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This was awesome and very creative I think. It made me laugh, and I don't know if it was suppose to. It flowed very well, and I feel very honored reviewing something from an accomplished novelist. I am just working on a book at this time. It is very obvious you have talent for writing.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your kindness. I rarely write poems. I was once, on this site, my poem read like a laundry list. LOL
Comment from Ulla
Oh, this made me smile, Barbara. You say you're not a poet! I couldn't even contemplate to write a poem this length. I think it was really funny, and Merry Christmas to you as well. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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Oh, this made me smile, Barbara. You say you're not a poet! I couldn't even contemplate to write a poem this length. I think it was really funny, and Merry Christmas to you as well. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 21-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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Thank you. I'm sure our wonderful poets on this site are having a field day with it. I am pretty sure I've broken every poetic rule there is.
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Thank you. I'm sure our wonderful poets on this site are having a field day with it. I am pretty sure I've broken every poetic rule there is.
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Probably, but the more the marrier, I think it was funny. :)))
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Thank you, again
Comment from c_lucas
You left the rattlesnakes out of one stanza. For not being a poet, you do a very good job of impersonating one. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
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You left the rattlesnakes out of one stanza. For not being a poet, you do a very good job of impersonating one. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the kindness
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My pleasure, Barbara. Charlie.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Sharon Haiste
You did a good job for 'not a poet.
Well done and thank you for sharing this fun poem with us.
Your picture is fun as well.
Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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You did a good job for 'not a poet.
Well done and thank you for sharing this fun poem with us.
Your picture is fun as well.
Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Sharon
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your kindness.
