Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

What beautiful piece of artwork you have chosen Mikey. It's beach weather here in Houston Texas lol. Masterfully crafted touching all senses my friend.
God bless
Steve

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2017

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Michael, you have beautifully written this lovely work for the free verse challenge. I wish you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy and Healthy New Year. Patricia

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2017

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I know why you're a member of the 'Fabulous Free Versers Club' because you're very talented at free verse. I enjoyed reading this romance poem. It seems love is just within reach, yet so far away.

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2017

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written free verse poem. When we meet someone we say we first testing the waters with caution we observe the other's reaction on our actions and how their actions influence us.

Merry Christmas to you and your family.

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2017