Comment from WriterBianca

Excellent

I love this poem. Twin2, as a writer myself, I want you to keep your boxing gloves on, and keep fighting for tomorrow. Tomorrow's can, and will go along way for you, and your writing. You are a gift.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks I really appreciate your review, I will take your advice and keep on fighting.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a well told story within your rhyme.
This is also a tragic story. A life full of promise that ended suddenly, and just at the cusp of something wonderful.
Well done.
Sharon

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks I really appreciate this review, I had to write it for my friend.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a lovely story and romance can be found in the strangest of places, we never know when we will meet the man of our dreams! I found mine in the Canaries! I loved the story you told and it is even more unique that I know that every word is true, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks, I really appreciate positive feed back.