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The Zoo on Galactica Prime

ekphrastic free verse

15 total reviews 
Comment from Leineco
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I could not help but laugh with glee as you turned
this image around from "pitiful imploring" to "don't
be fooled by the optics"!

As a SciFi/horror junkie I absolutely adored the way
you turned this image into a movie poster for
something like "They Came From _____" (LOL)
I had flashes of sooooo many classic cautionary SciFi
stories running through my head.

Wonderfully, wonderfully imagined!!!!!!

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

Comment from Sasha
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I enjoyed this ekphrastic free verse for this Behind Closed Doors writing challenge. I especially like that it is a unique and quite interesting story. Very nice work with this one and told a fascinating story too.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem and an excellent interpretation of the 'picture this' challenge. Sometimes we need to keep things behind closed doors in the interest of the innocent and vulnerable.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

Comment from Geeps
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I like this. I take away that there were human survivors from an apocalyptic event on earth, and these aliens initially took us in, but then, we f'ed things up, haha, with our propensity to judge, discriminate, etc. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

Comment from Sharon Haiste
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This is a good and different take on the PIX This Group, Behind Closed Doors writing event.
Well done, you tell a good and interesting story about the picture.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017