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"The Gift of Life II"

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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And will always haunt you till you make peace and that is not coming for awhile. Very well written and from the heart as always

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
    As always and forever...
    Ricky....
Comment from Hopefully oppressed
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Once again I am made to feel sympathy, I know no thing can make it go away or not hurt. One can only cope. The best way to overcome is different for all people.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
    Thanks hopefully.
    And hopefully you and yours...
    Will have a beautiful Holiday!
    Dr.Ricky
    1024.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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Thank you so much for sharing Jason with us. He sounds like he was a remarkable young man who was loved by many. I know this must have been very hard to write, but he is smiling down right now sending loads of blessings your way for having the courage to do it. Well done and thank you again for sharing it.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
    Amazing thing about Jason's Story it wasn't his death it wasn't my wife suicide even wasn't the fact that he safe for people with his organs it was the fact that he knew like Christ that his father would be summoning him back I have a picture taken 20 minutes for the accident showing my granddaughter Sasha just graduated high school 14 years ago sitting on his lap and a big smile and her arms open welcome them in the world to her Uncle Jason and Angel nangel that would soon be a gifting Angel giving life as he was trying to form a heart with his hands which went into a man named Chaz along with his lungs the name of his band even Cruz it called for ways to save so I have no doubt that not only did I create an angel who dated a woman young woman named Angel but that he's a gifting Angel and he knew his purpose in position I'll write about that someday it's it's not that these are hard to write about after 14 years it's more repetitious to me I've done it hundreds of times but it's the fact that I sometimes come up with these ideas and then forget about it so I will write a poem called the gifting angel and I'll put you in it Miss Mystic and then you watch were thanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from apky
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Hello Doc,

You really went through a lot in your life, and for this reason I always admire your strength and perseverence as you put all this down in writing and share it with all of us here and possibly elsewhere. At times like now, which is called the Festive Season it really makes me feel sad that someone like you is out there going through this.

But you have Faith and it gets you stronger, as you say:

"Yhe first four were small, golden flasks in a red, velvet, container."
"The Main was a beautiful box with His birth and Death stating...
"Little, Drummer, Boy."
"The large one was meant gor me and my wife Carolyn."
"Unfortunately, for my wife...
"It was too much with Jason and she decided on a 'Self-inflicted Suicide.'
"Ladies and gentlemen from not taking her necessary medications."
"That Horrid night on November 26th, 2003... "Still haunts me to this very day...

May you be blessed.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
    Thanks a pky I always enjoy you when you come and touch my soul with your reviews and realize the importance of what you were reviewing not only did Jason date an angel named angel he knew his fate just like Christ the picture taken 20 minutes for the accident proves it with my granddaughter for opening our arms who was only about 5 saying this is my Uncle Jason the Angels he's trying to form a heart which went into a man in chaz's chest along with his lungs with his very own hands so Not only was he an angel but he was a special gift in the angel his purpose as he knew was to say for which was the name of his band for ways to save thanks for your time dr. Ricky 1024 watch my next piece the gifting angel will bring tears into your eyes doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Trudi Perkins
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Wow,that,was precisely how it is growing up. Jason
reminded me of our granddaughter, although she hasn't past her demeanour and character is the same. It was interesting and made me want more at the end. Thank you for sharing with us.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
    Hi Trudy this is your first time reviewing my work here with Jason I don't think I mentioned at the end of the edges notes on this particular piece even though I've done it hundreds of times before that Jason is and was a organ tissue donor saving for lives 14 years later three still alive all were quite interesting the liver recipient hadn't eat your period of life from Philadelphia organ donor who received the heart and lungs Chaz I couldn't even walk a hundred yards on oxygen without collapsing now runs a 7K race and also bicycles 12K twice a year and Jason's honor his left kidney went to a unknown woman whose now grown and has a child is on her deathbed who probably has had and started her own family and the man who received the right kidney was divorcing from his wife because she just gave up on his life and now has survived and is being taken care of by his daughter I sent a package with a beautiful poem to that household and his daughter respond with a beautiful poem and return called Daddy's Little Girl to learn more of course about organ tissue donations simply call my dear friend Lara s Moretti the LSW with the gift of Life Philadelphia Pennsylvania at 1 800 donors one and be sure to tell Laura that Jason said hello dr. Ricky 1024 review coming through a cell phone with run-on sentences and possible grammar issues sorry
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This poem of a bereaved father offers his experience of living as he finds it is God who gifts all gifts and takes away; I liked the sentiment expressed. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
    Thanks for your fine review.
    Dr Ricky 1024.