Comment from Natali Holden

Excellent

I hope they find her soon. I'm worried that Tessa might love her mom enough that if Lilith explains, Tessa might help her or join her or something like that. Then Tessa might have to go against her friends and Jace. Keep up the excellent writing!
Natali ;)

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018

Thanks so much, Natali :)
As the story thickens, so much is going on and decisions have to be made. One little secret I will share with you about Tessa. She is loyal to the Breedline.
Hope to hear from you again my friend. More Breedline adventures to come.
Shana :)

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Another great post, Shana. Your amazing skill to weave in and out of different situations and manage to keep everything flowing with perfection is outstanding! You never lose my attention and always keep me coming back for more.
It looks like the plot thickens as the Bteedline feel helpless while Sebastian and his brother manage to stay hidden. Great writing!

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017

Thank you, ngage! :)
I appreciate your kind words and enthusiasm! So glad you enjoy my chapters. Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

I hope you keep your extensive author notes on file and don't have to type again and again. This is very well written with excellent characters. The world you have created is believable but it has a nice shadowy realm built into it. Great job!

Best of luck with all of your books.
Have a great day and Merry Christmas!
mike

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you, Mike :)
Yes, I definitely keep my author notes saved. All I have to do is download it each time. Since this is the third book in the series, I like to add this for new readers in case they are interested in reading it.
Thank you for the awesome compliments. I'm glad you find my Breedline world believable. That is heaven to my ears. My characters mean a great deal to me. They're almost like my children. :)
Hope to hear from you again, Mike. Have a Merry Christmas!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Your story continues well written.
The tensions and energy of your characters is felt by the reader.
The characters remain believable.
Well done.
Sharon

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you, Sharon :)
I'm excited and thrilled to see you reading more of my chapters. I love it when I spark up interest for a reader. Thanks so much and have a Merry Christmas my friend! :)
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

If I'm not mistaken, then Lilith is Tessa'a mother, and therefore, the mother of Stephen also, besides being the grandmother to the twins. In this episode, Stephen gets in touch with Tessa, to find out where she ism so the boys can attempt to rescue her. An excellent episode, and some developing intrigue. Well done, Shana, another great episode, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you my dear friend :)
Yes... Lilith (formally know as Lisa) is Tessa and Steven's biological mother. Now that her memories are coming back to her, after those unethical scientists transformed her into a supernatural creature and erasing her past, she has a change in heart. Stay tuned, more Breedline adventures to come.
I hope you and your family have a Merry Christmas. I will be wishing my beloved was here to share the holidays with me. But he will be home close to the end of March. Not far away... 90 more days!
Thanks again for everything!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 20-Dec-2017

Merry Christmas to you and yours, Shana, (not sure if I said it) plus safety for you youngman

Comment from apky

Exceptional

Oh, what a tense, tense, tense spot to leave the story off.

I'm still so amazed as to how you could weave such a complicated rivetting story and keep it all together, all the complicated wefts and weaves still tightly linked.

Kuodos, darling. I think you have one amazing story-teller brain there. Enviable!

In this chapter I found not a single thing out of tune or place.

Merry Christmas,
Aki

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you!!! :)
Whoo-hoo! This is awesome to hear!
I really don't know how I keep up with all the characters and all the story plots, but I get so sucked into my story, it all just falls into place. I'm not sure if you feel the same, but when I finish a chapter... I'm actually mentally and physically exhausted. Especially if the chapter has a lot of action involved. I feel like I'm the one experiencing all that stuff. Haha!
Thanks again for encouraging me. You make a difference and I appreciate you!
Merry Christmas to you and your family.
Your fan,
Shana :)

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Whispers in the night is part of my review for your chaos collection this was well-written Richard Seaman imagery as I read it it flowed well read well with no grammar issue so to speak ejective content was in place object the content greased that also descriptive measures of course we're perfectly aligned as of the other ones I've thanks for dr. Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you, Ricky :)
It's always nice to get feedback from you. It's encouraging and uplifting. Stay tuned my friend, more Breedline adventures to come! Merry Christmas to you and your family!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Ricky1024 on 19-Dec-2017

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

I continue getting the same interest and entertainment out of this large part in continuation of the novel, plot goes on so fast to the maturation of adventure, mystery still remains, journal is found, Tessa's stand is yet to be unveiled; DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you so much :)
I love to hear from you! Your feedback is very motivating for me. I hope to keep you entertained with more adventures of the Breedline to come.
Wishing you a Merry Christmas!
Sincerely,
Shana :)