Comment from Natali Holden

Excellent

This is what she's fighting against! I hate Mike and he's betraying the cops too. He's terrible. I hope she gets her revenge on him. I guess this is turning into men as well as women. She killed that one guy with Jackie and also Brad. I might be weird for this, but Anna is probably my favorite character. I hope she gets revenge on Mike for forcing her to do whatever he wants. Awesome chapter! Keep it up!
Natali ;)

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018

Thank you for your review. It's funny you say that about Anna, I too grew to like her. In fact, I liked her so much I change the entire last act just to keep her alive.
Thanks again for all your support it means a lot to me, take care.

Comment from apky

Excellent

Wow, that Mike is pretty warped come to think of it. But you left it off at a neat cliffhanger. I'm looking forward to what becomes of Mike and Anna.

Using poisonous darts to kill those women is ingenues(ingenious).

Why did you do it for anyway, huh? Maybe this is American English, Misty, but I'd say: WHAT did you do it for anyway, huh?

Summit Pd(PD), open up.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you so much for your review and catching my mistakes. That sentence does seem a little odd. Mike is one corrupt cop, makes you wonder what else he's done and got away with. Don't worry, Anna will take care of him. What she does is ingenious, lol. Can't tell I like her, can you?
Thank you again for all your support it always means so much to me, take care.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Wow. Mike is a real jerk, isn't he? A lot of cops are corrupt, but this takes the cake. Two more deaths. Surely they will find Anna with everyone looking everywhere. Better leave town! Why am I rooting for a killer, huh? LOL!

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you so much for your review. Mike is one twisted guy, but Anna will make sure he gets what's coming to him you can count on that. I can't explain why but I too have grown quite fond of her which I find a bit disturbing since she is a serial killer. Hmm, that could be a story, a mystery writer starts her own killing spree, with all of her serial killer, storybook friends. I'll have to think about that one, lol.
Thank you again for all your support take care.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

I like the fact this chapter lipstick murders was set for Summit New Jersey which is north Jersey for I live in South Jersey down by the Jersey Shore in a beautiful Resort call Long Beach Island know if you're familiar but if you know about Summit you may know about that finally written with great seem as well as imagery it read well flowed well with no grammar issues so to speak ejecta content Greystar objective and descriptive measures were perfectly aligned in place thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you so much for your great review. I've heard about Long Beach Island but I've never been there. In fact, I've only been in New Jersey once years ago, on my way to New York. I'm not sure where I was but I remember thinking how beautiful it was. All the facts about Summit, is research, lots and lots of research. It seems to be a very peaceful, family-friendly place, beautiful area, breathtaking houses, but the cost of living seems a bit high. Then again I was searching ritzy areas with the million dollar homes, lol.
Thanks again for your sweet review, take care.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This script is brief and to the point, expressive and realistic, characters are well flown, interesting and entertaining read of Anna; steady plot development is nice to read. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you so much for your kind review, I'm so glad you're enjoying my script and that the characters seem real, relatable. I hope you continue to read because Anna has more surprises ahead.
Thank you again for such a wonderful review, and continuous support Merry Christmas, take care.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Wow, this is fantastic, dramatic and superb writing I cannot get over your writing chop-extreme talent. This is edgy and pacy, a scary thought that one could be kidnapped but there is dark humour there too and I love it very well done kind regards and seasons greetings love and regards Meia x

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you so much for such a fantastic review and for all the high praise. it means a lot to me. It makes all the learning, editing, reediting and reediting my reedits worth it. Being a writer, I'm sure you know how that goes.
Thank you again for your wonderful words of encouragement, take care.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think probably Mike is worse than Anna. The fact that he employs her to help with the murder of his wife, her lover and then.... I look forward to the demise of both Mike and Anna, well done. Excellent murder/mystery, blessings, Roy
Typo : using (poisons) darts...poisonous?

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017

Thank you so much for your review and encouraging words. I have to agree, Mike is worse than Anna, a good cop gone bad. Don't worry he'll get his Anna makes sure of it and it's something far worse than death, lol.
Thank you again for all your support it's greatly appreciated, take care.
Oh, and the highlight thing, I used it on one of my books and all it did was bring it to the top of my portfolio.

reply by royowen on 18-Dec-2017

Well done