A book about Robert and me.
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Robert died"Our life from start till end.
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Comment from cflorian8
I am so sorry for your loss. The story you wrote is gut wrenching. Losing a loved one is a difficult experience. Know that your FanStory family is here to support you in your time of grief. The entry is easy read, the only mistake I see is in this paragraph.
"Two boys are on the way over. The middle one leaves at 0.00 hour, so will arrive early tomorrow morning. He will help me with buying a suit that fits. And anything else that is needed. " Insert the word we between so and will to clarify the subject.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
I am so sorry for your loss. The story you wrote is gut wrenching. Losing a loved one is a difficult experience. Know that your FanStory family is here to support you in your time of grief. The entry is easy read, the only mistake I see is in this paragraph.
"Two boys are on the way over. The middle one leaves at 0.00 hour, so will arrive early tomorrow morning. He will help me with buying a suit that fits. And anything else that is needed. " Insert the word we between so and will to clarify the subject.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Tanks for your kind review, ine Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from pbomar1115
Although I didn't know Robert, my condolences go out to his family. I have never reviewed any of his work but I'm sure those who have to empathize with a lost friend is taking it hard.
Phillip
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
Although I didn't know Robert, my condolences go out to his family. I have never reviewed any of his work but I'm sure those who have to empathize with a lost friend is taking it hard.
Phillip
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, ine Have a great and blessed Sunday. It is me, Ine, his wife that writes- he helped sometimes.
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You're welcome, and thanks.
Phillip
Comment from Sis Cat
I am sorry for your loss. There is never a good time for these, but yours come at the worst time during the holidays when people usually cherish time with family and friends. You told your autobiographical story in an unadorned fashion of listing the details of Robert's passing and people's reactions, including yours:
Two boys are on the way over. The middle one leaves at 0.00 hour, so will arrive early tomorrow morning. He will help me with buying a suit that fits. And anything else that is needed.
Finding or buying a suit to bury a loved one is a traumatic moment atop of the trauma of losing the person.
I wish you love, memories, and the consolation of family and friends during this holiday season without Robert. Thank you for creatively and honestly sharing somber news.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
I am sorry for your loss. There is never a good time for these, but yours come at the worst time during the holidays when people usually cherish time with family and friends. You told your autobiographical story in an unadorned fashion of listing the details of Robert's passing and people's reactions, including yours:
Two boys are on the way over. The middle one leaves at 0.00 hour, so will arrive early tomorrow morning. He will help me with buying a suit that fits. And anything else that is needed.
Finding or buying a suit to bury a loved one is a traumatic moment atop of the trauma of losing the person.
I wish you love, memories, and the consolation of family and friends during this holiday season without Robert. Thank you for creatively and honestly sharing somber news.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, ine Have a great and blessed Sunday. Just Boxing Day my sister came.
Comment from Treischel
Oh my dear Ine, I am so sorry and saddened to hear that your beloved Robert passed away. You and your family will be in my prayers today and throughout this whole holiday season. My the angels hold you in their arms and comfort you in this trying time.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
Oh my dear Ine, I am so sorry and saddened to hear that your beloved Robert passed away. You and your family will be in my prayers today and throughout this whole holiday season. My the angels hold you in their arms and comfort you in this trying time.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, ine Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from doggymad
Robina thank you for sharing this new with us. I know you had many happy years together and I
can only imagine how you are feeling.
Remember you have many friends here when you feel ready to come back
Prayers and hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
Robina thank you for sharing this new with us. I know you had many happy years together and I
can only imagine how you are feeling.
Remember you have many friends here when you feel ready to come back
Prayers and hugs
Freda
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, ine Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Lucian Carter
How to respond to this?
I'm so deeply sorry for you. Even though I don't know you or Robert this simple missive makes me feel your ache. We'll be here to welcome you back when you do return.
Do the best you can to muddle through. I hope you find solace in family, friends and the season.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
How to respond to this?
I'm so deeply sorry for you. Even though I don't know you or Robert this simple missive makes me feel your ache. We'll be here to welcome you back when you do return.
Do the best you can to muddle through. I hope you find solace in family, friends and the season.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, ine Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am sorry for your loss and will continue to pray for the family. Please know you have friends who care out here in FS world. Take all the time you need.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
I am sorry for your loss and will continue to pray for the family. Please know you have friends who care out here in FS world. Take all the time you need.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, ine Have a great and blessed Sunday. Thanks, I do.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, Ine, I am so very sorry! I know you miss him he has been with you for so many years as your beloved husband. I'm glad your family are there for you. He is with God now, but I'm sure he will still be watching over you. Big hugs, my dear friend. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
Oh, Ine, I am so very sorry! I know you miss him he has been with you for so many years as your beloved husband. I'm glad your family are there for you. He is with God now, but I'm sure he will still be watching over you. Big hugs, my dear friend. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, ine Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from mermaids
I am so sorry for your loss and am sending prayers and positive thoughts your way. I am glad you shared with Fanstory what you have been going through and look forward to when you are able to return to writing.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
I am so sorry for your loss and am sending prayers and positive thoughts your way. I am glad you shared with Fanstory what you have been going through and look forward to when you are able to return to writing.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, ine Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Dan Diego
I am sorry to hear of your loss. Though we are miles apart and occasionally pass each other on this writer's web-site. I am sorry. I shall pray for your family.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
I am sorry to hear of your loss. Though we are miles apart and occasionally pass each other on this writer's web-site. I am sorry. I shall pray for your family.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, ine Have a great and blessed Sunday.