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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I wish for a time machine also. This is very well written and quite a different tribute to another part of your family. Thank you for taking us to meet more of your family

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
    Thanks Barbara I'm actually not going to finish this till tomorrow but I have completed...
    "Within the Midness and the Madness of My Mind!"
    Ricky...
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Good morning, Ricky: This is another great story that you are sharing with us here. I am so happy that you are writing about all of your memories. It is so important to document all of what needs to come pouring it. It relieves of of the grief and angst we keep bottled up without realizing what kind of damage it could cause us internally.

I was sorry to read that your father started to drink away the normal necessities in life. It is so sad when our loved ones become so depressed and miserable with life that they don't think about the important things. My heart is with you there because my son, drank himself into to nightmarish and suicidal behaviors. This drove our whole family crazy. He soon turned to drug addiction until it took his life. It kills me to think of all we went through but I would do anything to go through it all again just to have him back in my life. Forgiveness is the key...letting go but keeping the good memories.

I started with the poetry first because each poem tells a story that I want to remember to include in my auto-biography. I see that you are doing the same thing. Your story is so organized and well put together. I will be looking forward for the continuation of this story. Have a blessed day and as always stay strong in God's love...and much love...

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
    Thanks again mystere I'll give you the heads-up before anybody gets it on the second part of this but not completely the beginning part of course is all non fictional or true okay now the part with my son Jason and his organ which is his liver of one of four that were donated to save lives is true but the part that's coming up with which was in the end of Alex going in a time machine back in time is is fictional but he will do that and then he will take my my grandson will take my son's liver that was actually put in up to a man who lived eight years from Philadelphia and delivered at by his it's time machine that was created by the professor of course this part is not is not nonfiction is fictional it's created by the professor and he will go back to that year 1972 of my dad drank himself to death but will he be able to get my son Jason deliver to his great-grandfather in time we will have to see dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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Your Dad witnessed lots of horrible things during his stint in the Navy so drowning in a bottle was not too surprising as many vets even today do the same. Maybe one day when the world is finally at peace - addictions will vanish too since there won't be anything left for people to hide from. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
    Hi Mystic Angel be sure to catch the second part of this a little bit later on today the second part will be fictional though with my grandson traveling back in time to 1972 of my dad passes away from alcoholism he will be using the Harvest organ of the liver which is of course true from my son Jason and my grandson will take that back in time to 1972 and let's see what he can do I don't want to give it away thanks dr. Ricky 1024