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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
It will for a long time, the unexpected after the storm.
This one is very well done and your passion is displayed here more than any other piece I have read
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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It will for a long time, the unexpected after the storm.
This one is very well done and your passion is displayed here more than any other piece I have read
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Thanks Barb I did enjoy writing this
Ricky...
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
What an awful thing to have had to go through on top of losing Jason. It might have made a difference had she gone to the ER when you wanted to take her initially but more than likely the outcome would have been the same. She is in heaven with Jason waiting for you and one day you will all be together again. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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What an awful thing to have had to go through on top of losing Jason. It might have made a difference had she gone to the ER when you wanted to take her initially but more than likely the outcome would have been the same. She is in heaven with Jason waiting for you and one day you will all be together again. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Thanks and so true true Angel.
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, Ricky: I am so horrified at reading this heart wrenching story. You have suffered the loss of your only son and only eight months later, the loss of your beautiful wife. What a total loss. my heart and prayers go out to you, my friend. This would take anyone's breath away and it is obvious that God has given you the strength to live on and to move on without them. The pictures are lovely and the colors that you have chosen for this poet make it a breathtaking post totally. We all have our horror stories to tell that are our lives, the tragedies that we have endured but suffered.
I was happy to see that you did mention your appreciation, dependence and thanks for the Heavenly father and His Son, Jesus Christ. It is so important to hold on to His wonderful promise. In Isaiah 55:11 God says that his whenever his word leave his mouth it will have sure success. It will succeed in what ever he send it out to do. This simply means that He will never break a promise and all prophesies must and will take place.
In all of my loss, I take comfort in His promise that i can see my loved ones again. He will resurrect them back from the dead to live forever and ever in paradise, where humans will reach perfections. There will be no more tears, no more death, no more crime, pain, suffering, hunger, sickness, blindness, deafness, natural disasters, Cancer - all of theses former things will pass away forever. There will be no evil. (Revelations 21:3 & 4, Psalms 37 : 10,11 & 29, Isaiah 33:24) These promises are all over the bible, God's word. I find my strength in a thorough study of hi word. Stay strong, my friend. Much love...
Isaiah 41:10 & 13
10) Fear not, for I am with you;
Be not dismayed, for I am your God.
I will strengthen you,
Yes, I will help you,
I will uphold you with My righteous right hand.'
13) For I, the Lord your God, will hold your right hand,
Saying to you, 'Fear not, I will help you.'
New King James Version (NKJV)
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Good morning, Ricky: I am so horrified at reading this heart wrenching story. You have suffered the loss of your only son and only eight months later, the loss of your beautiful wife. What a total loss. my heart and prayers go out to you, my friend. This would take anyone's breath away and it is obvious that God has given you the strength to live on and to move on without them. The pictures are lovely and the colors that you have chosen for this poet make it a breathtaking post totally. We all have our horror stories to tell that are our lives, the tragedies that we have endured but suffered.
I was happy to see that you did mention your appreciation, dependence and thanks for the Heavenly father and His Son, Jesus Christ. It is so important to hold on to His wonderful promise. In Isaiah 55:11 God says that his whenever his word leave his mouth it will have sure success. It will succeed in what ever he send it out to do. This simply means that He will never break a promise and all prophesies must and will take place.
In all of my loss, I take comfort in His promise that i can see my loved ones again. He will resurrect them back from the dead to live forever and ever in paradise, where humans will reach perfections. There will be no more tears, no more death, no more crime, pain, suffering, hunger, sickness, blindness, deafness, natural disasters, Cancer - all of theses former things will pass away forever. There will be no evil. (Revelations 21:3 & 4, Psalms 37 : 10,11 & 29, Isaiah 33:24) These promises are all over the bible, God's word. I find my strength in a thorough study of hi word. Stay strong, my friend. Much love...
Isaiah 41:10 & 13
10) Fear not, for I am with you;
Be not dismayed, for I am your God.
I will strengthen you,
Yes, I will help you,
I will uphold you with My righteous right hand.'
13) For I, the Lord your God, will hold your right hand,
Saying to you, 'Fear not, I will help you.'
New King James Version (NKJV)
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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hi again missed you you're such a beautiful person inside and outside you not only honor my son but also my wife twice now would you wonderful review and then you're wonderful quotes from the Bible it's good to see somebody appreciates my editors notes with Heavenly Father you're only the second person to ever state that and it goes in everyone and it's never different it's always exactly the same also occasionally when I write a dedicated piece I put on to learn more about organ tissue donation simply call my dear friend Laura S Moretti the LSW with the gift of Life Philadelphia Pennsylvania 1 800 donors one as long as recently as last December right across the street from the new Temple in Philadelphia with two testimony I know if you were there and you would have listened to that you would have been in tears I had a man who lost his son years ago who was thanking me for the to Gift of Life peace and he look like he had been visibly shaking and upset they brought back a bad memory so thanks for all your reviews and keep reading my work and I'll keep reading yours dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem thinks of her and the accident and happening turned mishap to death of the beloved wife; nice taletelling lively and appealing, I ever like, this is more factual.
DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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This poem thinks of her and the accident and happening turned mishap to death of the beloved wife; nice taletelling lively and appealing, I ever like, this is more factual.
DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 13-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Thanks Alcreator I am my deceased wife Carolyn Ann thanks you for this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
