This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Veronica Explains The Situation"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Joy Graham
I'm amazed at how easily you write the scenes back and forth in time. I enjoy the cozy feel when your family is together. I like the way you get everybody busy doing research to learn more about the story in an effort to get the issue resolved. I'd crumble and not get the job done myself. Good writing, my dear.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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I'm amazed at how easily you write the scenes back and forth in time. I enjoy the cozy feel when your family is together. I like the way you get everybody busy doing research to learn more about the story in an effort to get the issue resolved. I'd crumble and not get the job done myself. Good writing, my dear.
Joy xx
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Aww, thank you, Joy. It's been fun doing this and learning at the same time. I have four more parts to write before those magic words 'The End' come. I've already got a plot for the third and final plot. :) Thanks again and humongous hugs! Sandra xxx
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sandra, well I am so glad she is back home now...she needs the rest...now her and Mildred can do some research...but for now her and James can go make whoopy...LOL...very well written chapter my so sweet friend...love your story told angel...and love you lots and lots...Linda xxoo
tell Ian hi for me...and you are in my prayers...xxoo
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Hi Sandra, well I am so glad she is back home now...she needs the rest...now her and Mildred can do some research...but for now her and James can go make whoopy...LOL...very well written chapter my so sweet friend...love your story told angel...and love you lots and lots...Linda xxoo
tell Ian hi for me...and you are in my prayers...xxoo
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Hi, Linda. How come you manage to get into their minds and know what they want to do? Make whoopy? LOL, LOL, LOL!!! Thank you so much for reading my story again, I know you've been in another world for a while, but it's nice to see you haven't lost that wonderful fun sense of humour. :) Love you too, dear friend, take care. Big hugs. xx Sandra xx
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Hi Sandra, you are always so welcome my so wonderful friend...and yeah!!!! you know...whoopy....LOL...and you are always sooooooooo welcome sweet angel...love you...and you take care...buggest hugs...xxoo love
Comment from wordsfromsue
moment I left was quite disconcerting because so much had happened to me in that blip in time ( I wonder if 'blip of time' sounds better?)
We didn't have to wait long before the school bell rang, and the children came yelling and laughing into the playground. (Should it be 'onto the playground?)
Great chapter with a hint of the resolution to come. I hope poor Franco's life gets sorted.
Sorry for the short review. Not feeling well.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2017
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moment I left was quite disconcerting because so much had happened to me in that blip in time ( I wonder if 'blip of time' sounds better?)
We didn't have to wait long before the school bell rang, and the children came yelling and laughing into the playground. (Should it be 'onto the playground?)
Great chapter with a hint of the resolution to come. I hope poor Franco's life gets sorted.
Sorry for the short review. Not feeling well.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much, my poorly, dear friend. for coming and reading this part. Bless you lovely heart. Wrap up warm, have a nice glass of hot toddy and go to bed and rest. I'll check you later! Big hugs, my friend. :) xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the beginning, especially the
final comment of the committee.
-It is nice to see Ver. back home.
-It is wonderful that Michael will
be his usual little boy self now, and
Ann is bubbling over with excitement
about being in the school play.
-It is nice to see Mildred will be a part
of things now.
-With her family around her, Ver. now
has the support of the people she loves.
-A good ending, and a good chapter, Sandra.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2017
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-I like the beginning, especially the
final comment of the committee.
-It is nice to see Ver. back home.
-It is wonderful that Michael will
be his usual little boy self now, and
Ann is bubbling over with excitement
about being in the school play.
-It is nice to see Mildred will be a part
of things now.
-With her family around her, Ver. now
has the support of the people she loves.
-A good ending, and a good chapter, Sandra.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2017
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Thank you, Pam. I decided it would be nice to have a balance of home and away, it keeps Veronica focused on the job she has to do. With James and Mildred to keep her grounded, (especially Mildred) and being there to help her in the research, she'll be fine. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part, there wasn't much going on, but it has to progress naturally to be as believable as this type of story can be. I really value your thoughts, my dear friend, you've always been so kind, I just hope you know how much I appreciate you. Thank you so very much for the 6 shiny stars, you are wonderful! :) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars, review, and thoughts, Sandra. I agree that there needs to be a balance of home and away for Ver. It is nice that it happens to be the right season for her to be home. I just thought of that🙂 Here's to the holiday season and a special friendship.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
An excellent return to "reality"
to remind the reader there is also a This Time
Plus an interesting twist in time as no time has elapsed,
this will also make it much easier to deal with the present.
Looks like detectives V and M will return again
to delve into the past of Jacob Argall.
Your romance readers will enjoy the return of James
with the nice little tease at the end of the chapter.
It's interesting how the chapters seem to end
just when things are always getting interesting. lol
Excellent chapter in the time - that time conundrum
RS
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2017
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Hello Sandra,
An excellent return to "reality"
to remind the reader there is also a This Time
Plus an interesting twist in time as no time has elapsed,
this will also make it much easier to deal with the present.
Looks like detectives V and M will return again
to delve into the past of Jacob Argall.
Your romance readers will enjoy the return of James
with the nice little tease at the end of the chapter.
It's interesting how the chapters seem to end
just when things are always getting interesting. lol
Excellent chapter in the time - that time conundrum
RS
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2017
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LOL! You are so funny, Robert. I realise that many of my readers have to keep an eye on their blood-pressure, so I have to cut it short. :)) Yes, Veronica and Mildred are hot on the trail searching for more clues as to where Jacob has gone. Thank you so much for another lovely review, and for all the lovely stars, too. I won't be posting another part until after Christmas, so unless I have one from you to read, I wish you a wonderful Christmas and a brilliant 2018. Biggest hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again I completely enjoyed reading your story. You have done another good job.
She sat down beside me and Michael wriggled from her arms and reached out for a cuddle. (You don't need down, it's understood)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017
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Once again I completely enjoyed reading your story. You have done another good job.
She sat down beside me and Michael wriggled from her arms and reached out for a cuddle. (You don't need down, it's understood)
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much, Barbara, for another of your lovely reviews. I nice to know you are still enjoying my story.Big hugs, my friend. ) SandrA XX
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nicely done, Sandra! I enjoyed this part, and I didn't find any nits to comment on. Looking forward to more of your story and how it will come to a conclusion.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017
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Nicely done, Sandra! I enjoyed this part, and I didn't find any nits to comment on. Looking forward to more of your story and how it will come to a conclusion.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017
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Bless your heart, thank you so much, Russell for the lovely review and all those shiny stars!! There is a lot do be sorted out yet, but now Veronica has the extra support from James as well Mildred to help her in her quest. I wish you a very happy Christmas, Russell and a wonderful 2018! :) Sandra xxx
Comment from write hand blue
Hi Sandra, the readers interest is held by the magnificent detail and family politics. Truly believable we realise only at the end, it is fiction. Veronica is shown as a warm hearted lady; giving the story a nice soft edge to it.
Once again I can find no errors.
Have a merry Christmas and the best of good fortune for 2018.
~Mel~ xxxx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017
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Hi Sandra, the readers interest is held by the magnificent detail and family politics. Truly believable we realise only at the end, it is fiction. Veronica is shown as a warm hearted lady; giving the story a nice soft edge to it.
Once again I can find no errors.
Have a merry Christmas and the best of good fortune for 2018.
~Mel~ xxxx
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017
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What a really lovely thing to say about my story, Mel, thank you so very much! The fabulous 6 stars are the icing on the cake, you have truly made my day!
I wish you a merry Christmas, too, and a happy, healthy, wonderful 2018! Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxxx
Comment from pbomar1115
Veronica's investigative life, going back and forth in the past, has to be tiring. For one, the grinding to get information can erode her physically as well as mentally. It is good she has a supporting cast, Mildred, and her husband, around her.
Phillip
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017
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Veronica's investigative life, going back and forth in the past, has to be tiring. For one, the grinding to get information can erode her physically as well as mentally. It is good she has a supporting cast, Mildred, and her husband, around her.
Phillip
Comment Written 15-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017
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I totally agree with you, Phillip, James and Mildred being there to help is the one reason Veronica can go on. She needs their support and she gets it in sackfuls. Thank you so much for reading this part, my friend, and for your thoughts on the story. Big hugs, have a wonderful Christmas! :) Sandra xxx
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You're welcome and thanks, Sandra.
Phillip
Comment from alexisleech
Bravo, Sandra. I know how hard it can be to move a story forward, and you have become a master!
It must be a huge relief to know Michael is no longer taken over by Joe, and Veronica can move back to her problem saving mode. I loved that the 'powers that be' appreciated Mildred's lovable saying - I know we all do!
Hugs from France,
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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Bravo, Sandra. I know how hard it can be to move a story forward, and you have become a master!
It must be a huge relief to know Michael is no longer taken over by Joe, and Veronica can move back to her problem saving mode. I loved that the 'powers that be' appreciated Mildred's lovable saying - I know we all do!
Hugs from France,
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 15-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much, my dear friend, for the lovely 6 stars and wonderful review!! Being a mum,. I could imagine how Veronica would feel, i think most mums could. I have to admit, Mildred is my favourite, I know I shouldn't admit that, but I think most authors do have a favourite. Big hugs, my friend, :) xxxxx Sandra
