~ When Night Calls ~
Minute Poem20 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Minute poem, a contest entry, is a good work.
Thoughts explored and expressed fantastic poetic.
I like and enjoyed the originality of approach, strong imagery read.
DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017
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This Minute poem, a contest entry, is a good work.
Thoughts explored and expressed fantastic poetic.
I like and enjoyed the originality of approach, strong imagery read.
DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 13-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017
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Thank you Alcreator LD. I appreciate you taking the time to review my Minute poem. Warm wishes to you this festive season. ~DD
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a skilfully written minute poem that begins with a personification of the torchlight and concludes with three rhyming adverbs that makes one wonder why so many pundits wish us wrtiters to eschew the damn things. They make this one interesting.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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This is a skilfully written minute poem that begins with a personification of the torchlight and concludes with three rhyming adverbs that makes one wonder why so many pundits wish us wrtiters to eschew the damn things. They make this one interesting.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Thank you Pantygynt. I appreciate you taking the time to review my Minute poem and for your supportive comments. Warm wishes to you this festive season. ~DD
Comment from Aussie
Wonderful illustration to compliment your minute poem. I liked this so much. You have penned a great poem that aptly describes the night and the critters, even the wind. Excellent writing my friend.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017
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Wonderful illustration to compliment your minute poem. I liked this so much. You have penned a great poem that aptly describes the night and the critters, even the wind. Excellent writing my friend.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017
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K, Thank you so much. I really appreciate your review and feedback. Happy holidays to you and your family. ~DDoxo
Comment from kahpot
This is an excellent minute poem I can read two ways in these words, it sounds like the coming of a storm, or the change from night to day I think this is a very clever poem well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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This is an excellent minute poem I can read two ways in these words, it sounds like the coming of a storm, or the change from night to day I think this is a very clever poem well done****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Thank you Kahpot. I appreciate you taking the time to review my Minute poem. Warm wishes to you over this festive season. ~DD
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles PoemsOfDD
I like your minute poem
It was full of sounds and rhythm of musical sounds and best of all the fun rhymes to make you poem fun to read
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Smiles PoemsOfDD
I like your minute poem
It was full of sounds and rhythm of musical sounds and best of all the fun rhymes to make you poem fun to read
Gert
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Thank you Gert. I appreciate you taking the time to review my Minute poem. Warm wishes to you over this festive season. ~DD
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is an excellently done minute poem in rhyme and flow. I love the description and the way you ended it was the best...stopping suddenly.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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This is an excellently done minute poem in rhyme and flow. I love the description and the way you ended it was the best...stopping suddenly.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Thank you Barb for taking the time to review my Minute poem. Your comments are much appreciated. Wishing you warm blessings over the festive season. ~DD
Comment from royowen
A sweetly themed and written work, the language is very well expressed and the qualifying iambic meter is spot on. This is an excellent entry in this contest, it's right up there with the best, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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A sweetly themed and written work, the language is very well expressed and the qualifying iambic meter is spot on. This is an excellent entry in this contest, it's right up there with the best, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Thank you Roy for taking the time to review my Minute poem. Your comments are much appreciated. Wishing you warm blessings over the festive season. ~DD
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You to dear friend
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written minute poem. At night each sound seems louder and it can be heard from far. There is a river about 3 km from my home. I can hear the frogs croaking from there at night.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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A very well-written minute poem. At night each sound seems louder and it can be heard from far. There is a river about 3 km from my home. I can hear the frogs croaking from there at night.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Thank you Sandra. I appreciate you taking the time to review my Minute poem. Warm wishes to you this festive season. ~DD
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A great atmospheric write with vivid descriptive words that gives your poem a beautiful rhythmic quality, loved it and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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A great atmospheric write with vivid descriptive words that gives your poem a beautiful rhythmic quality, loved it and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Thank you Dolly for taking the time to review my Minute poem. Your comments are much appreciated. Wishing you warm blessings over the festive season. ~DDoxo
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Minute' writing prompt.
The picture is lovely and a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Minute' writing prompt.
The picture is lovely and a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017
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Thank you Sharon. I appreciate the time taken to review my Minute poem. Warm blessings to you over the festive season. ~DD
