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"The Gift of Life II"

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Comment from Gloria ....
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Hugs to you friend, Ricky. You have been through so much. This is a lovely tribute to your son and many thanks to you for sharing from your heart.

Gloria

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
    Well then we can produce a piece of art in many ways we can mold it with our hands we can paint it with our fingers we can draw it from a pencil or we can create it with our mine which I believe is the most precious and the best way God gives you that gift it be a sin not to utilize it no matter what the circumstances no matter how much the pain it needs to come out and be presented for people to read it will mend broken hearts it will repair ruin lives who will make the next sword and sorry being realize that there's worse out there than they have and make their day thanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This is a nice poem.
Bereaved father thinks what he had done and how he had fun and enjoyed with his deceased son this time.
I liked, enjoyed the read.
DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much AGAIN,
    Alcreator.
    Ricky...
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I did the same with my sons and I understand the reason for writing this piece. Very well done and the love is passionate in your feelings

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
    Hank's Barber let us never forget no matter how hard no matter how much pain it brings us to reflect back all that means nothing the memory of our children is the most important thing and we have a gift and would that gif we can percent as we present we can allow people to have not going through this experience to realize this Christmas to gifted they have gotten the true Gift of Life thanks for this stock to Ricky 1024
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Ricky

= OMGoodness, what a powerful write.
= Love and grief intermingled is such a strong combination.
= You show the love for your son superbly, my friend.

Cheers, J
*** MERRY CHRISTMAS & HAPPY NEW YEAR! ***
(*<*) A Smile Is Just A Frown Turned Upside-down. (*<*)

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
    Thanks again J ax were enjoying another one of my well written and dedicated pieces to Jason what I've learned in 14 years as is that sometimes God puts people on this Earth for special reasons Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your memories are with you at this time of year and your write has warmth for your son, I am sorry for your loss and your write is very touching, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
    Thanks doll you truly are a dream Angel I have to put that in his notes in about organ tissue donation dr. Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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You may not see him but he is always with you - in your heart and fondest memories. One day you will be together again and merrily build those snowmen in a place called paradise. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
    Thanks Mystic Angel for reviewing this I still have to put the editor's note tonight and have time because of going to church dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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Bless you Ricky, you have been through o much and losing your beloved son is just beyond tragic after also losing your beautiful wife. I am so sorry for your loss but I know that God will reunite you of that I am certain.It seems so cruel what is given and taken away but it only really happens to the best of people who's faith can remain strong like yours well done Ricky you are pouring out your heart here, and I can feel your pain and loss, may God send you something to soothe your soul. All my best wishes and love Meia x

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
    Thanks may your words do ring true I sucked with the others noticing for organ tissue donations we've actually had some snow here in New Jersey last night kind of wet snow and out going up to 40 thanks for your time dr. Ricky 1024
reply by Meia (MESAYERS) on 10-Dec-2017
    It is snowing here too :( Love Meia x
Comment from Reese Turner
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I cannot imagine the pain of losing a child and your poem speaks well to involve the reader in the loss. If this is a true personal story, I pray that you will have a great support group and strong Faith to get you through. I once came across an advice which has since comforted me in times of loss: "Never let the sorrow of good-bye diminish the joy of your time together." God Bless.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
    One of my review was posted in there review that God only tests those that have the faith they can survive an experience such as a loss of your son and then your wifey months later which tool is limited degree is true but thanks for your time and concerns and really wonderful review dr. Ricky 1024