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Autumn

Changing from autumn to winter

8 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written abecedarian poem covering the whole Autumn experience from beginning to end down the alphabet in chronological order. All in all a beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
    Thanks for the read and the kind words.
Comment from Sylvia Kennedy
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Thank you for sharing. I am inquisitive as to your omission of New Years Eve,
or day. You are vocal with your writing in varied areas; even, when you are
appreciative of meandering in your walks; maybe, something playful,
privileged people are able to appreciate, and delve and expressively
immerse themselves in, meandering. I appreciate your heartfelt simple
writing. Merry Christmas and the Best of Happy New Years to you and yours.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
    You are correct, but I finished with the writing of Christmas cards. I also did not include Thanksgiving, which upon reflection I should have. Thanks for your read and comments.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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This is a good poem for the Abecdarian writing prompt entry.
The picture is lovely and a good match for the poem.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
    Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A joyful Abecdarian Poem filled with delightful colour and changing senes and you managed to use those awkward letters at the end of the alphabet with ease, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
    Thank you for the read and the kind review. Much appreciated.
Comment from MSJVClarke
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Well! This is a very nice poem and well-done, indeed. It takes a good imagination and desire to express such a vivid scene with the requirement of using all letters of the alphabet. You transitioned from the beginning Autumn right into the holiday season very well.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
    Thank you for the read and the kind review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Ricky1024
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Well written with great theme and imagery.
And yes, read well, flowed well, with no grammar issues.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content.
Dr.Ricky 1024.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
    Thanks for the read Dr. Ricky and your encouraging words.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully. You have used every letter of the alphabet to full advantage and delivered genuine poetry in doing so to boot. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much for the read and the encouraging review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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In this abecedarian poem 'Autumn' poet tells about changing from autumn to winter.

This is a fine work.

I enjoyed the rhymes, flow of thoughts, visuals and imagery.
DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
    Thanks for the read and the kind words.