Paper
tercet, cinquain, tercent5 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Dove;
You have used a great deal of imagery and simile to convey how you view the writing process. I liked how you used paper as the 'key.' Well done,
~patty~
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
Hi, Dove;
You have used a great deal of imagery and simile to convey how you view the writing process. I liked how you used paper as the 'key.' Well done,
~patty~
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Dear patty, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from frogbook
This was really quite lovely and inventive. Much enjoyed as we think of this writing need in a more lofty manner. Great stuff, this poem.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
This was really quite lovely and inventive. Much enjoyed as we think of this writing need in a more lofty manner. Great stuff, this poem.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Dear frogbook, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi (*<*)
= Ooooh, this is neat, the way you mingled the writer and the paper.
= Goodness, if I had to write out a manuscript on said paper, and not a word processor, even I wouldn't be able to read it.
= With arthritis in my hand, I'd invent a new language! LOL
= Good write.
Cheers, J
*** Merry Christmas & Happy New Year ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
Hi (*<*)
= Ooooh, this is neat, the way you mingled the writer and the paper.
= Goodness, if I had to write out a manuscript on said paper, and not a word processor, even I wouldn't be able to read it.
= With arthritis in my hand, I'd invent a new language! LOL
= Good write.
Cheers, J
*** Merry Christmas & Happy New Year ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Dear Jacqueline, Thank you for your comments and review. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! Dove
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice poem about paper and the author. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
This is a very nice poem about paper and the author. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Beautiful. Paper, such a simple topic yet you made it so much more. I enjoyed this immensely, excellent work, I love how you go from how paper helps you write to its origins and everything in between. God bless you kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
Beautiful. Paper, such a simple topic yet you made it so much more. I enjoyed this immensely, excellent work, I love how you go from how paper helps you write to its origins and everything in between. God bless you kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Dear Meia, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove