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2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Intruder"
...stories and poems about the boys

35 total reviews 
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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When people love their dogs they have no shot at turning down a new one now and again particularly when they are sweet little puppies. Oh the stories to come! xoxo d

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Hi, deborah;
    Yes...way too true. That little face is killing me!

    Thank you for reading, my friend,

    ~patty~
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Cute puppy. Often dogs have a difficult time adjusting to someone new in the home. I think they have feelings similar to children and need reaffirmation the same way.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Hi, Thomas;
    Can you tell my husband that this puppy is cute, sweet, adorable and won't cost too much?

    He keeps shaking his head no. I think Howie gets his attitude from him,

    ~patty~
Comment from Marvin Calloway
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I never thought Howie would be that upset. In a way, it's understandable.
This is well written. You keep the differences in their personalities distinct.
Marv

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Hi, Marv;
    Thank you so much for reading this little move into the minds of Howie and Bernie. Yes, Howie is quite disgruntled. I started packing little things yesterday, and he saw the boxes and went and lay in the corner nose to tail. That's always a sure sign he is upset.

    ~patty~
Comment from MelB
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What an adorable little puppy! Is it yours or just for the story? If it is, I'm sure there is some jealousy going on. Hopefully, all adjust and get along well.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Hi, Mel;

    I wish this were my puppy. No, it is from the same breeder as Howie and Bernie came from. I'm subscribed to the YouTube feed for them. I think my hubby will kill me if I try to get another dog. The cost of properly taking care of a dog is prohibitive. So, while I'm pretty sure the dogs would adjust, my pocketbook wouldn't,

    Thank you for reading,

    ~patty~
reply by MelB on 07-Dec-2017
    Animals are expensive. We have 5 horses and 3 cats.
Comment from robina1978
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A lovely photo of a small puppy, that complements your story perfectly. The big boys don't like it very much. One even threatens to run away. I don't think his Madam boss will let him. I hope not. No changes needed.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Hi there;
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments. No - that puppy will have another home. I won't be getting another dog anytime soon,

    ~patty~
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written story. Our pets pick up very quickly when something strange is going on in the household. They are not always happy to accept a new pet at the beginning.

Typo
What are(you) talking about?

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Hi, Sandra;
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm not really getting another dog. It just made for a good story,

    ~patty~
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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"What are [you] talking about?
What's a Shorkie. A shepherd/yorkie? We are crazy about animals too, but after the last cat died we decided not to go that route again. We still have two and a half dogs. The half being my grand children's wiener dog. A miniature one. She thinks she lives both places and pretty much tries to boss even our Black Lab, Freddie.LOL He lets her of course up to a point. Cute poem Patty.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Hi, Nancy;
    Thank you for having my back and catching the nit.

    A Shorkie is a Shi-Tzu and a Yorkie mix. Bernie is a Morkie; a Maltese and Yorkie mix.

    We will not be getting another dog anytime soon. The cost of properly taking care of one is prohibitive. While the dogs might adjust, my pocketbook will not,

    Thank you for reading,

    ~patty~
Comment from apky
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I feel with Howie. I just read your poem about tll the removal boxes and thought about Howie and Bernie, as if I sensed this write was waiting in my inbox.

Awww, isn't Shorkie so sweeeet!

Walking with a wooden gate(did you mean "gait" here, Patty?), and growling with each step, Bernie approached the room.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Hi, Aki;
    Of course, I meant 'gait.' Thank you so much for catching the nit. I appreciate your time to read and review. Enjoy the rest of your week,

    ~patty~
Comment from royowen
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I suppose getting another "pal" for Howie and Bernie, is probably creating a menagerie of dear little creatures, I don't think they will enjoy sharing you at all Patty, but then, from my experience they actually "adapt". Excellent adventure in the lives of Bernie and Howie, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Hi, Roy;
    No, no. I'm NOT getting another dog though this made a good story. It is just so expensive to properly care for a dog, and while the dogs might adapt, my pocketbook will not.

    Thank you so much for reading and continuing to support my work,

    ~patty~
reply by royowen on 07-Dec-2017
    Hah hah that's so true Patty.
Comment from patcelaw
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Patty, this is a wonderful story for the contest. Good luck in the contest. I like how you have personified Bernie and Howie and have them talking. It was a fun read.
Patricia

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Hi, Patricia;
    Yes, Howie and Bernie are quite the conversationalists. I love to imagine what they are saying or thinking.

    I'm glad you enjoyed the story,

    ~patty~