Freedom
Acrostic-Loop / just having ago34 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Thanks for the reminder. People need to let their voice be heard. Politicians usually don't listen, but in case they ever do, we should give them something to listen to.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the reminder. People need to let their voice be heard. Politicians usually don't listen, but in case they ever do, we should give them something to listen to.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Mankind is the blood that bleeds for our freedom, a true conviction, well said.
I liked the poem, free flow of thoughts and originality of approach.
DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Mankind is the blood that bleeds for our freedom, a true conviction, well said.
I liked the poem, free flow of thoughts and originality of approach.
DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Knighteagle
Well written loop poem. Very true, though anymore I am not sure freedom means what it used to. As people often misinterpret equal as well. The rite that you could have included, that is extremely important, demand that those for whom you voted keep their promises. When special interests continue to buy loyalty the voters will never be free. Excellent piece on a topic most skip over.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Well written loop poem. Very true, though anymore I am not sure freedom means what it used to. As people often misinterpret equal as well. The rite that you could have included, that is extremely important, demand that those for whom you voted keep their promises. When special interests continue to buy loyalty the voters will never be free. Excellent piece on a topic most skip over.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from BOO ghost
Nice choice in a concrete image. Like the acrostic. But the younger generation has not lived long enough to remember what freedom is about. With no rain there is no green grass. The red represents the blood spilled from Americans. Rights. the can be bent. Are we equal? Or are we fooled to think we are equal. The corrupt politicians are the puppeteers that make and govern law. Mankind loves to kill. He will never learn. BOO-tastic!
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Nice choice in a concrete image. Like the acrostic. But the younger generation has not lived long enough to remember what freedom is about. With no rain there is no green grass. The red represents the blood spilled from Americans. Rights. the can be bent. Are we equal? Or are we fooled to think we are equal. The corrupt politicians are the puppeteers that make and govern law. Mankind loves to kill. He will never learn. BOO-tastic!
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thanks my friend, sorry for late response but all good and back now****kahpot
