Grab My Hand
Free Style with rhymes for lyrics7 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
Hi my friend. Do you have someone new in your life in your new town or someone from the past?
Happy holidays to you. Wishing you many blessings in the new year!
teresa
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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Hi my friend. Do you have someone new in your life in your new town or someone from the past?
Happy holidays to you. Wishing you many blessings in the new year!
teresa
Comment Written 09-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
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same same. sucker for punishment, but the extra hands here to help with putting boxes down into crawlspace and putting up shelves is worth the inevitable, "`gotta go now". lol thxs for your review and A VERY MERRY X'MAS TO YOU AND FAMILY, AGAIN I THINK.
LULUBE
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Well lulu you have put it out there and if he's smart he'll jump! I like the way you sing song your piece and let your someone know he's the one and you're waiting for him to take a step closer. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Well lulu you have put it out there and if he's smart he'll jump! I like the way you sing song your piece and let your someone know he's the one and you're waiting for him to take a step closer. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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thxs for this awesome review. Glad you enjoyed the lyrics, now I just need the tune to go with it. All good things take some time, that's what I've heard. lol
lulube
Comment from Janilou
An interesting poem indeed.
Just letting you know
I'm still on my way
To start my life
With a new beginning
Come grab my hand
From the earlier verses, I'm not sure it's such a good idea to invite this person back in?
I didn't find any errors. You might consider putting up a warning for language. It didn't bother me, but some people on this site are very sensitive. (smile)
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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An interesting poem indeed.
Just letting you know
I'm still on my way
To start my life
With a new beginning
Come grab my hand
From the earlier verses, I'm not sure it's such a good idea to invite this person back in?
I didn't find any errors. You might consider putting up a warning for language. It didn't bother me, but some people on this site are very sensitive. (smile)
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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thxs for your comments and the language tip. I struggled with that word, whether or not to use it, but nothing else that I put in it's place had the same sound, beat and emotion to it. thxs for your time and review.
lulube
Comment from Sherman541
Isn't love like that - one minute all is well and the next not so much. You really like someone want to be a friend or maybe more than just a friend, You are upfront, honest and sincere, but they keep stringing you along and then they don't know what they want. Before you know it can be too late. Like the poem and the picture. Going places and wanting to go together. Sherman541
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Isn't love like that - one minute all is well and the next not so much. You really like someone want to be a friend or maybe more than just a friend, You are upfront, honest and sincere, but they keep stringing you along and then they don't know what they want. Before you know it can be too late. Like the poem and the picture. Going places and wanting to go together. Sherman541
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Love your comments. Love is an ever changing situation to handle. Sometimes the love just doesn't cut it. Sad but true.
thxs for your time and for the review
lulube
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you are welcome :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That sounds like an offer many could not refuse! A well rhymed poem with yearning undertones and sexual promises! Good luck! Best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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That sounds like an offer many could not refuse! A well rhymed poem with yearning undertones and sexual promises! Good luck! Best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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thxs for your awesome comments and review. Luck is needed in this case but I've gotten used to being alone as well. Maybe too much, don't like to bend too much any more. but am always looking for that last relationship that will comfort me in my final days here on earth.
lulube
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks poet still believes to get her after long missing and wishes to get him grabbed by hand to cross the height and come successful; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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This speaks poet still believes to get her after long missing and wishes to get him grabbed by hand to cross the height and come successful; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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thxs for your great comments in your review. I'm grateful for your time and read.
lulube
Comment from Ricky1024
This is an introduction to a romance novel and attraction between female to the male but he sure isn't too sure about the situation it was rich and semen imagery and it read well flowed well and had no grammar issues I checked of content as well as object that were excellent descriptive measures perfect thanks for this talk to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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This is an introduction to a romance novel and attraction between female to the male but he sure isn't too sure about the situation it was rich and semen imagery and it read well flowed well and had no grammar issues I checked of content as well as object that were excellent descriptive measures perfect thanks for this talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
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thxs so much for this awesome review. Thxs for the grammar check as well, I periodically fail at this part of writing. Glad you enjoyed this little piece of lyrics
lulube
