Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

As beautifully written this poem maybe, it does not meet the contest criteria in regards to the syllable count. Perhaps you can modify it by removing "the" in the first and third lines to read as follows:


I adore horses
meditation is needed
crossing over fields

Just a thought. Good luck.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice haiku you have penned about the horses. You used correct amount of syllables with great descriptive wording and art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

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 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Good

To be completely fair to the other entries one much review based on the rules as they are listed.
I adore the horses - 6 syllables
meditation is needed - 7 syllables
crossing over the fields - 6 syllables for a total of 19 which exceeds the allowed limit. Also lines one and two are not connected to complete a thought as they are two separate statements. You use multiple filler words: I, the, is, and the again. The last line is not a satori as it offers no 'aha' or epiphany concerning the observations made in the first two lines.
You have lots of time to fix this and I hope you do as your idea is conceptually sound. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

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 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week. I will change.