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Christmas Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Christmas 2017 / Remember the Wonder"
Collection of Christmas Poetry

7 total reviews 
Comment from MissMerri
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Happy New Year Darren! I'm just now trying to catch up with my reading and replies since my internet was down for days. I loved this Christmas poem. It has a creative and unique rhyme pattern to it and a wonderful message. It is so much fun to read and I enjoyed everything about it. (BTW, I've missed seeing you around here. Where are you?) Hope 2018 brings you much joy. Don't stop writing and singing!! (And don't forget to save me a book.)

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
    Thanks so much for the wonderful review. Our meetings have really been touching go I appreciate your kind words and staying in touch.
    Blessings, brother badger
Comment from mermaids
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This is an excellent poem for this time of year. it emphasizes how we should behave. I like the line" Open wide your eyes". If we open our eyes, we can do more and see more. Excellent poetic form here.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by mermaids for your perspective in your comment I really appreciate it. Merry Christmas to you and yours and a Happy New Year. Blessings, Darren
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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A well done message in a very unusual style of rhyming. It flows great with the wording and the double rhyming that makes it easy to read.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much for your review and your warm comment. I appreciate your personal perspective. Blessings, and may the good Lord continue to bless you this holiday season
    Darren
Comment from Bucketlist
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Hi B.B. Loved your poem. Different chronological picture. Simply stated message poetically
Well written. Thanks for sharing.
I joined Shout Outs to the Lord (new club) by teri7. I love writing on that one, it's uplifting. Be blessed thanks for sharing your penning.
Trisha

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much for your review and your warm comment. I appreciate your personal perspective. Blessings, and may the good Lord continue to bless you this holiday season
    Darren
Comment from smileycloud
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very good way to speak of times lost then the hope that they are found again in your lovely poem
I like your rhyme scheme
I can feel the writers compassion for the child who grew up and forgot
i can also feel the faith and insistence that it will all be fine in the end
blessings
have a smiley day
Lorraine

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much for your review and your warm comment. I appreciate your personal perspective. Blessings, and may the good Lord continue to bless you this holiday season
    Darren
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a wonderful poem with excellent advice for living our lives at this time of year and especially on Christmas day itself. Coming from a male POV is a good thing as well, since men see things differently from females. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. Patricia

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much for your review and your warm comment. I appreciate your personal perspective. Blessings, and may the good Lord continue to bless you this holiday season
    Darren
Comment from DR DIP
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Yes i did read it twice only to admire the very interesting rhyme scheme you have created in the poem It is a good message that you convey Thanks for sharing this

dip

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much for your review and your warm comment. I appreciate your personal perspective. Blessings, and may the good Lord continue to bless you this holiday season
    Darren