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Still a mystery7 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good poem about the complexity of love.
And it is a very complex subject. One I don't think anyone really understands.
I think that part of the problem is the failure to recognise that lust and love are two different things.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sharon
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A good poem about the complexity of love.
And it is a very complex subject. One I don't think anyone really understands.
I think that part of the problem is the failure to recognise that lust and love are two different things.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Dec-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. Life in itself is a mystery from day to day. We have to find our way through life. Sometimes we have to go through obstacles and overcome hardships to reach our final destination.
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A very well-written poem. Life in itself is a mystery from day to day. We have to find our way through life. Sometimes we have to go through obstacles and overcome hardships to reach our final destination.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2017
Comment from poetwatch
OK my friend this is good. You're a researcher. You look at the subject, study it habits, taste its fruit and experiment. Yet, you're speaking of physical love. This study is meant for creation. What you look for is a lasting relation, one that can lead you where no other soul has taken you. Good luck on your search and good poem.
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OK my friend this is good. You're a researcher. You look at the subject, study it habits, taste its fruit and experiment. Yet, you're speaking of physical love. This study is meant for creation. What you look for is a lasting relation, one that can lead you where no other soul has taken you. Good luck on your search and good poem.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a nice philosophic and existence of love poem.
The relation, value and essence of relation is still a mystery.
I liked and enjoyed the work endeavoured.
DR ALCREATOR
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This is a nice philosophic and existence of love poem.
The relation, value and essence of relation is still a mystery.
I liked and enjoyed the work endeavoured.
DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
Comment from Liberty Justice
Now this poem is very interesting, and seems like a philosophical view of love and how it might be based on some type of electricity. Also, love is a meeting of the minds where two souls intertwine. SO COOL. liberty justice
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Now this poem is very interesting, and seems like a philosophical view of love and how it might be based on some type of electricity. Also, love is a meeting of the minds where two souls intertwine. SO COOL. liberty justice
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
Comment from Lucian Carter
This isn't a bad piece. The problem is it's riddled with spelling errors.So many that it ruins the flow and takes you out of the telling. I suggest getting someone else to edit it then changing your post. That would take your piece from good to great.
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This isn't a bad piece. The problem is it's riddled with spelling errors.So many that it ruins the flow and takes you out of the telling. I suggest getting someone else to edit it then changing your post. That would take your piece from good to great.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You describe well here with all its physical, scientific and natural flaws, love is unpredictable and a testament to our devotion and heartfelt weaknesses, love Dolly x
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You describe well here with all its physical, scientific and natural flaws, love is unpredictable and a testament to our devotion and heartfelt weaknesses, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
