Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

What an interesting concept, Dan.
The sentiments expressed within this poem are quite lovely and wonderful.
How nice to give a gift to a total stranger at Christmas for performing an act of kindness.
How great is that?!?

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017

Thanks for the comments.

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Comment from gene roush

Good

This has a nice religious feel to it. A nice reminder of the season's intent.
One misspelling to correct:
Do not forget one Gift to Jesus renendered(remembered)
Thanks for sharing.
Have a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Gene

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 Comment Written 05-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017

Thanks for the comments. "Rendered" sorry for the misspelling, Thanks for bringing attention to this.

reply by gene roush on 05-Dec-2017

Rendered is much better

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written advent poem. The darkness before the light that makes us appreciate the light more when it finally comes.

Possible typo
Do not forget one Gift to Jesus renendered(remembered)

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Thanks for the comments.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A joyous time with great expectation so don't be sad, there is light to come. Your write is meloncholy and it is the way you feel, but your mood will lift as Christmas comes, love Dolly x

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Thanks for the comments.