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My Book of Poems 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "At this time of year"
a collection of my poetry

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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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Nothing wrong with adding a little cheer here and there. You might also try Franjelica (hazel nut flavor) which goes nice with java. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi there;
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I haven't had Franjelica in years. Hmmm - now there's a thought!

    ~patty~
Comment from Pantygynt
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That reminds me. I must stock up on things like that -- coffee additives let's call them -- when I am next doing food shopping. Personally my penchant is for brandy, but the idea of additives is excellent and keeps the year turning.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Jim;
    seems my little poem has reminded people of the benefits of the Christmas season,

    ~patty~
Comment from c_lucas
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That is truly getting into the "Spirit" of Christmas. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Charlie;
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Yes, the Spirit of Christmas is alive and well at my house,

    ~patty~
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Christmas poem. Everything feel different this time of year. A normal Monday morning can become a day to enjoy with things we like to do.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Sandra;
    Thank you for reading and reviewing. This is truly a special time of year,

    ~patty~
Comment from patcelaw
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Patty, this is a real delightful poem for an early morning like me. I am glad you like your coffee. As for me, I do not like coffee. I love the smell when it is brewing, but have never been able to develop a taste for it.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Patricia;

    I took a long time to get used to coffee. I was twenty-four when I was out with some people from my Bible study on a Wednesday evening. I was paying for refills on my hot chocolate, and everyone else only paid for one cup of coffee - so I switched.

    I used to take cream and sugar in it, and then when I met my father-in-law and he saw me adding things, he said, "Are you going to drink coffee or all that other stuff?' So, I started drinking it black and it is only at Christmas that I have anything special in it,

    Enjoy your day,

    ~patty~
reply by patcelaw on 04-Dec-2017
    I can understand your reasoning, but I fear that would never change my taste buds.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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I prefer Kraken spiced Black Rum in my coffee, Patty. But I'm sure Bailey's has a similar soothing and calming effect, LOL.
Aren't those days great when we have absolutely nothing we have to do?
Here's hoping you have a relaxing and enjoyable day.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Dean;
    Thank you for the good wishes. Tomorrow will be a flurry of activities; taking the dogs to be groomed, driving to the title company to give them earnest money on the new deal. (Yes, the deal on another house fell apart, but I think I found the right house this time -- I certainly hope so.)

    But today is just for me - and my special coffee!

    ~patty~
    I like Black rum with Sprite.
reply by Dean Kuch on 04-Dec-2017
    Good luck tomorrow.
    Just take it easy today. :)
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and realistic Christmas poem for this time of the year. We are usually baby sitting each day so we don't get to add things to our drinks. We have to be really alert! Very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I love this type of the year! Merry Christmas my friend! love, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi, Teri;
    Well, I guess you just gave me one reason to NOT be sad about having my grandkids to take care of, but I would gladly trade my special Christmas coffee to spend more time with them.

    I hope you have a wonderful Christmas, too.

    ~patty~
reply by Teri7 on 06-Dec-2017
    lol I say enjoy the kids. They are truly worth it and grow up way too fast!
Comment from beizanten
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an interesting and well written first stanza you pretty much capture my interest. the festive mood flow well through the second stanza, you have done great. a lighthearted last stanza

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I love my special Christmas coffee!

    ~patty~