Bill's Blind dating.
Dating Disasters.18 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Very well written, and I wonder what is in store for this seemingly hapless and luckless Man, the wording is great, very well done an excellent story, good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
Very well written, and I wonder what is in store for this seemingly hapless and luckless Man, the wording is great, very well done an excellent story, good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thanks I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Thesis
Hahaha, so....now there is some interest? He's probably lying. It is another one with false teeth. LOL.
This was an interesting portrait of how one can become disillusioned easily, contented with reality, and then intrigued by the unknown. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
Hahaha, so....now there is some interest? He's probably lying. It is another one with false teeth. LOL.
This was an interesting portrait of how one can become disillusioned easily, contented with reality, and then intrigued by the unknown. Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I found this HILARIOUS. Keep writing because this comedy write is rare- it REALLY cracked me up...you say you have only written one Haiku? Well get writing because I want to read it if it is anything as funny as this. Very strong work I hope I get to see a lot more of it, it was relatable and very funny BRILLIANT kind regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
I found this HILARIOUS. Keep writing because this comedy write is rare- it REALLY cracked me up...you say you have only written one Haiku? Well get writing because I want to read it if it is anything as funny as this. Very strong work I hope I get to see a lot more of it, it was relatable and very funny BRILLIANT kind regards Meia xx
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thanks Meia. No I said I'd only posted one Haiku in 2011 on F.S.
I have written stacks of stuff. I write everything but comedy is my favourite genre. I'm pleased you enjoyed my silly little rhyme.
Comment from Leineco
Delightful!
(on so many levels)
This poem was the perfect antidote to my current
state of governmental weariness!
Thanks for the smile :-)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
Delightful!
(on so many levels)
This poem was the perfect antidote to my current
state of governmental weariness!
Thanks for the smile :-)
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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So pleased you liked my silly little rhyme. Thanks a lot.
Comment from For better for verse
Really enjoyed this poem, great content with good rhyme and it really made me smile. Think you're probably safer home with the cat, but the 27 year old does sound interesting.
Great job....well done.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
Really enjoyed this poem, great content with good rhyme and it really made me smile. Think you're probably safer home with the cat, but the 27 year old does sound interesting.
Great job....well done.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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I love your review. Thanks, so glad you liked my silly little rhyme.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Men.
We put so much emphasis on physical attributes rather than focusing on the inner beauty.
Wouldn't you agree?
You're damn right we do, and for good reason, heh-heh!
Cute poem, Jeni.
All men are dogs...
WOOF!
~DK ;)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
Men.
We put so much emphasis on physical attributes rather than focusing on the inner beauty.
Wouldn't you agree?
You're damn right we do, and for good reason, heh-heh!
Cute poem, Jeni.
All men are dogs...
WOOF!
~DK ;)
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Well Dean it is a well known fact that men don't think with their heads. Right? Thanks for reading..
I always like to hear your opinion . Cheers Jen.
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Yeah, I'm afraid you're right, Jen. At least not until we get older and wisen up, LOL.
You're very welcome.
~DK :)
Comment from marybell1
I have just finished smiling after reading"Bill's Blind Dating". You wrote it and rhymed it well and I enjoyed your story line and photo.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
I have just finished smiling after reading"Bill's Blind Dating". You wrote it and rhymed it well and I enjoyed your story line and photo.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Love Jenx
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You are most welcome. I look forward to more laughs in the New Year.
Merry Christmas.
Marybell1.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Friend trying to fix man up with blind dates, but turns out to be fags and women with problems. Such a funny and humorous poems as man would rather stay at home with his cat. Musical flowing rhymes. truly, liberty justice
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
Friend trying to fix man up with blind dates, but turns out to be fags and women with problems. Such a funny and humorous poems as man would rather stay at home with his cat. Musical flowing rhymes. truly, liberty justice
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your comments
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You're welcome, dear poet, for comprehensive review and stars and wishing me GOOD LUCK in contest, Today!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL this is absolutely wonderful written fun piece. I love the blind dates he has had and not all the questions has him very intrigued. A fun read
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
LOL this is absolutely wonderful written fun piece. I love the blind dates he has had and not all the questions has him very intrigued. A fun read
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your comments
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written dialogue about blind dating. We never know what to expect when we are set up for a blind date. When we are older and had a perfect partner before, we are very hard to find someone that satisfies us.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
A very well-written dialogue about blind dating. We never know what to expect when we are set up for a blind date. When we are older and had a perfect partner before, we are very hard to find someone that satisfies us.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Thank you Sandra my friend.