Dark Might VS Sharp Light
Darkness fails facing dazzling light.43 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. Excellent content, but I am partial to Archangel Michael. All the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. Excellent content, but I am partial to Archangel Michael. All the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hello Mystic Angel 7777,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words, and also for the best wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a striking poem, told simply and with clear impact intent - it appears succinct and spiritually rendered in its smooth and lyric movement...
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In my opinion, a striking poem, told simply and with clear impact intent - it appears succinct and spiritually rendered in its smooth and lyric movement...
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hello Evesayshi,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words, and also for the veiled Good Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
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You are very welcome, RP...Eve
Comment from Janet Foor
A clever and creative 2-4-2 poem. Nice play on words with great imagery. Good artwork to compliment your work. Very nicely written and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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A clever and creative 2-4-2 poem. Nice play on words with great imagery. Good artwork to compliment your work. Very nicely written and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hello Janet,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words, and also for the Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from zekeziemann
I am one of your competitors for this contest, but wanted to reward you for a poem well written with a timely message. I hope more will honor the true Christmas.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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I am one of your competitors for this contest, but wanted to reward you for a poem well written with a timely message. I hope more will honor the true Christmas.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hello Zekeziemann,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
We may be competitors, but not rivals.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Nice work on this short but very clever poem excellent wording choices and very well presented I wish you the very best of luck in the competition warmest regards Meia x
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Nice work on this short but very clever poem excellent wording choices and very well presented I wish you the very best of luck in the competition warmest regards Meia x
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hello Meia,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words, and also for the Best of Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. Nothing lasts forever as the day comesxto an end and darkness takes over. So does te darkness comes to an end when it is time for the sun to shine.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. Nothing lasts forever as the day comesxto an end and darkness takes over. So does te darkness comes to an end when it is time for the sun to shine.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hello Sandra,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Hitcher
They do say that in the end...The End, light will always conquer darkness and we will all get to bask in its beauty. Unfortunately we are not at The End and dark might is running free. Great little 2-4-2 for the contest friend, good luck!!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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They do say that in the end...The End, light will always conquer darkness and we will all get to bask in its beauty. Unfortunately we are not at The End and dark might is running free. Great little 2-4-2 for the contest friend, good luck!!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hello Hitcher,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words, and also for Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Ulla
Hi RP, this is a great 2-4-2 poem. They are not easy to write at all, but you've managed to say a lot in so few words. I really like the slant rhyme and your words are a wonderful interpretation of the artwork. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hi RP, this is a great 2-4-2 poem. They are not easy to write at all, but you've managed to say a lot in so few words. I really like the slant rhyme and your words are a wonderful interpretation of the artwork. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hello Ulla,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by Good Luck Wishes and Shiny SIX STARS.
I'm highly grateful to you for the same.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi RP, I found this piece of yours took me a while to fathom out - I think I get the meaning, very subtle and clever. I read it as good wins over Evil which is evident everywhere beneath Good - shining brightly above. A strong message achieved with only eight syllables - very well done. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hi RP, I found this piece of yours took me a while to fathom out - I think I get the meaning, very subtle and clever. I read it as good wins over Evil which is evident everywhere beneath Good - shining brightly above. A strong message achieved with only eight syllables - very well done. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hello Dorothy,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words, and also for Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from twotock
Nice topic. I like the clever use of a slant rhyme in 'to' to maintain the rhyme and not render it twee in relation to the theme. Also, I like the double edged blade of 'sharp light' and its imaginative suggestion.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Nice topic. I like the clever use of a slant rhyme in 'to' to maintain the rhyme and not render it twee in relation to the theme. Also, I like the double edged blade of 'sharp light' and its imaginative suggestion.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Hello Bolonomad1,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
