Dark Might VS Sharp Light
Darkness fails facing dazzling light.43 total reviews
Comment from Writingfundimension
Wow, you managed to pack a real punch with this 2/4/2 contest entry. I like the powerful way 'dark night' and 'sharp light' play off each other. It's not easy to create an impact with so few words, but you obviously manage to do just that.
WFD
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Wow, you managed to pack a real punch with this 2/4/2 contest entry. I like the powerful way 'dark night' and 'sharp light' play off each other. It's not easy to create an impact with so few words, but you obviously manage to do just that.
WFD
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hello Writingfundimension,
What a pleasant surprise!
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Winslow
Dear RP,
If only this were true in our world today. Great illustration to highlight your poem. I see this is recognized. Congratulations.
Winslow
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Dear RP,
If only this were true in our world today. Great illustration to highlight your poem. I see this is recognized. Congratulations.
Winslow
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Hi Winslow,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
Comment from Neonewman
Love reading this short pieces. This one is quite well crafted my friend. The artwork above paints a picture of Satan's demise. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Love reading this short pieces. This one is quite well crafted my friend. The artwork above paints a picture of Satan's demise. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Hello Steve,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
Have a nice weekend, and HAPPY CHRISTMAS!
~ RP
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My pleasure, Merry Christmas
Comment from artemis53
What a fantastic image as well as it's words. There's an unbreakable spirit here of Faith and hope that will not go easily into the night. Well done and I wish you the best in the contest. I can see you dug deeply for this one.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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What a fantastic image as well as it's words. There's an unbreakable spirit here of Faith and hope that will not go easily into the night. Well done and I wish you the best in the contest. I can see you dug deeply for this one.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Hello Artemis53,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by the best wishes.
Have a nice weekend, and HAPPY CHRISTMAS!
~ RP
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very good and an excellent contest entry. Truth will always prevail over darkness. You should do well in the contest, I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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This is very good and an excellent contest entry. Truth will always prevail over darkness. You should do well in the contest, I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Hello Thomas Bowling,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by the best of luck wishes.
Have a nice weekend, and HAPPY CHRISTMAS!
~ RP
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Nice use of this short format to deliver a hard-hitting piece. If only darkness always bowed to the light, the world would be a pleasanter place.
Best of luck to you.
GMG
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Hi there,
Nice use of this short format to deliver a hard-hitting piece. If only darkness always bowed to the light, the world would be a pleasanter place.
Best of luck to you.
GMG
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Hello GMG,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by Best of Luck Wishes.
Have a nice weekend, and HAPPY CHRISTMAS!
~ RP
Comment from MelB
This is a well written 2-4-2 poem. A nice contrast between dark and light. Dark will always fall to light in the end. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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This is a well written 2-4-2 poem. A nice contrast between dark and light. Dark will always fall to light in the end. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Hello MelB,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by the Best Wishes.
Have a nice weekend, and HAPPY CHRISTMAS!
~ RP
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You're welcome. Merry Christmas!
Comment from dragonpoet
This can be about night changing to day or about forces of evil being defeated to forces of good. The picture seems to show the second theme with an avenging angel crusading for good.
Hope this did well in the contest
Keep writing
Happy Holidays.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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This can be about night changing to day or about forces of evil being defeated to forces of good. The picture seems to show the second theme with an avenging angel crusading for good.
Hope this did well in the contest
Keep writing
Happy Holidays.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Hello Dragonpoet,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by Good Wishes.
Have a nice weekend, and HAPPY CHRISTMAS!
~ RP
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You are so very welcome, RP.
Merry Christmas to you too.
dp
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
So much said in so few words!
The constructive metaphors both heightens the drama, and conveys the concept of good over evil perfectly.
The picture you have chosen confirms the strength of the words you use.
Warmly,
Juliette
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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So much said in so few words!
The constructive metaphors both heightens the drama, and conveys the concept of good over evil perfectly.
The picture you have chosen confirms the strength of the words you use.
Warmly,
Juliette
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Hello Juliette,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
Comment from LIJ Red
I am still not sure if I like such short poems as a form. The rules are plain and if a clear message comes through, I presume the shortshort poem is excellent.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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I am still not sure if I like such short poems as a form. The rules are plain and if a clear message comes through, I presume the shortshort poem is excellent.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Hello LIJ Red,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
Have a pleasant time!
~ RP
