Detective Monroe
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "The only witness is safe"Serial murderer and Detective have a commonality
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Comment from Beverly Easterling
Held my thoughts and had me thinking about rechecking my locks on my country home in BFE~ it's not my type of read and I'm very new at this reviewing thing and feel as if I can't be a good judge~ However! I did think you have done this a lot and seen the maturity in it~ My older sister would love this~
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Held my thoughts and had me thinking about rechecking my locks on my country home in BFE~ it's not my type of read and I'm very new at this reviewing thing and feel as if I can't be a good judge~ However! I did think you have done this a lot and seen the maturity in it~ My older sister would love this~
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much for your feedback
Comment from Janilou
Quite a disturbing situation indeed. It does happen of course. I recall a rapist being caught in my city of many years ago, who turned out to be a police officer.
I would not like to think I had a double like this poor man. Poor Eddie.
Notes:
The killer watched the news as it reported about the murder of a mother of two, and her thirteen-year-old daughter was in the hospital under sedation.
You could take out the word "about"
"I had set her free, released her from her misery, but her daughter may hinder my mission if she saw enough to identify me(,.)" the killer thought out loud.
remove the period
"Thank you Sister." Eddie hung up the phone and headed back to the shower. While in the shower, he kept thinking and wondering if he took Claire out of the hospital; then why is she in a homeless shelter? Eddie got (dress) and headed to the station. After arriving at the station, he headed towards the shrinks office. He knocks on the door.
dressed
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Quite a disturbing situation indeed. It does happen of course. I recall a rapist being caught in my city of many years ago, who turned out to be a police officer.
I would not like to think I had a double like this poor man. Poor Eddie.
Notes:
The killer watched the news as it reported about the murder of a mother of two, and her thirteen-year-old daughter was in the hospital under sedation.
You could take out the word "about"
"I had set her free, released her from her misery, but her daughter may hinder my mission if she saw enough to identify me(,.)" the killer thought out loud.
remove the period
"Thank you Sister." Eddie hung up the phone and headed back to the shower. While in the shower, he kept thinking and wondering if he took Claire out of the hospital; then why is she in a homeless shelter? Eddie got (dress) and headed to the station. After arriving at the station, he headed towards the shrinks office. He knocks on the door.
dressed
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you will fix that.
