Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

BOO's favorite paragraph: "Yes, I remember going to sleep and somehow becoming awake?"
"And, somebody placing me gently outside...
"On the pathway to the trees...
"For goodness sake because something had happened...
"Beyond our control...
"And, the townspeople said that it was a curse as I was told."
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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017

Maybe it was a ghost from a relative past or heavenly father that decided to little boy needed to be saved this was so powerfully written I've already had a 2 reviews of people thinking of me and it was an actual true thing I put down their fiction so I couldn't understand that but I guess it's because the way I talk about the mother making the bread and the father cutting the wood but I also got a lot of Praise on the picture thanks boo and have a good bluish rest of your day dr. Ricky 1024

reply by BOO ghost on 10-Dec-2017

You too Ricky. BOO is also Rickey. Shalom~

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Ricky

= Baked bread and Mom--wonderful combination.
= Even if it burned once in a great while--although burning down the house?
= That's a bit tricky!

Cheers, J
*** Merry Christmas & Happy New Year ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017

Thanks Jax if we get all right beautiful Christmas stories are poems for songs for the rest of this month they be all wonderful presents for a reviewer's and yes a frown turned upside down is a smile doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Oh wow this is absolutely the best I have read. I love the telling and the way you kept going back to the memories and all the while waiting to tell us of the fire

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017

I'll I see you already enjoy the Christmas peace thanks again Barbara I'm going to review one of yours and then I'll talk to you again tomorrow on the 9th of course or tenth.
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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

An excellent write and story, the time pain came to your town of misery, very well done with a beautiful picture to enhance your wonderful words, keep writing****kahpot

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017

Thanks k a h p o t I'm glad you thoroughly enjoyed this piece talk to Ricky 1024

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

From wonders to cinders did the old cottage go. While very said you did survive which goes to show that even if the bread is a bit well done - it can still nourish of hope resides inside. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017

Thanks Angel this is a well thought-out review and you basically caught the gist of it that actually the child was a fictional wasn't me even though it look like that and they weren't my parents of course because this is all considered fiction piece and of course just at the fictional child escapes thanks for your time dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Well done Doctor Ricky, starting with a beautiful picture and supported by a lovely poem.
But one thing has me stumped. Where in the world are you to be three days ahead of us?
It's Dec 9/ here and you say your poem was written on Dec 12/17.
Sharon

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017

Oops!
Fix that!
Did not check my watch.
Oops!!
It's the watch!
Ricky....