He thinks he's a prince
Anyone can buy a castle12 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
lol, Well, this is a great entry for the 5-7-5 humor poetry contest, my friend.
I wish you luck. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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lol, Well, this is a great entry for the 5-7-5 humor poetry contest, my friend.
I wish you luck. ~Kerry
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much Kerry.
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You're very welcome. Sorry about the late reply, must of missed an entire page, lol.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Jenintorre - Yeah, you got this right! Good job on this honest 5-7-5 humourous poem entry. It certainly got a chuckle out of me...anyone can buy a castle. Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Jenintorre - Yeah, you got this right! Good job on this honest 5-7-5 humourous poem entry. It certainly got a chuckle out of me...anyone can buy a castle. Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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I am so happy that you liked my poem. Thanks a lot.
Comment from Dean Kuch
While I'm not too sure who this poem is referring to (I'm guessing it must be someone well known to our brethren across the big pond in the UK), I do appreciate the near rhyme attempt in using "castle" and "asshole."
Best wishes to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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While I'm not too sure who this poem is referring to (I'm guessing it must be someone well known to our brethren across the big pond in the UK), I do appreciate the near rhyme attempt in using "castle" and "asshole."
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Many thanks for reading. I appreciate your comments.
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My pleasure.
Good luck.
~Dean
Comment from mmonaghan777
You at least accomplished the challenge of the contest. Maybe you could go one step further and find a new two syllable word to use instead of the last one. It really shows your politics.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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You at least accomplished the challenge of the contest. Maybe you could go one step further and find a new two syllable word to use instead of the last one. It really shows your politics.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Such as? sorry don't get it.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, Jen: You truly have a knack for these humorous, getting right to the point entries. This 5-7-5 entry says it all and with a big smile and laugh and it gives a big smile and laugh. It also reminds me of someone in particular. (lol) I winder if we are thinking about the same person. Much love...
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Good morning, Jen: You truly have a knack for these humorous, getting right to the point entries. This 5-7-5 entry says it all and with a big smile and laugh and it gives a big smile and laugh. It also reminds me of someone in particular. (lol) I winder if we are thinking about the same person. Much love...
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Perhaps we are but it is pure fiction, just a bit of fun I'm so pleased you liked it. Thanks a lot.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 humorous poem. When someone lives in a Castle it doesn't mean he is a prince or any royalty. His actions and attitude towards other will determine his status.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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A very well-written 5-7-5 humorous poem. When someone lives in a Castle it doesn't mean he is a prince or any royalty. His actions and attitude towards other will determine his status.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thank you Sandra, my friend. X
Comment from marybell1
I have just read your poem "He thinks He's a Prince, which is meant to be a 5-7-5 poem. Unfortunately I have counted six syllables in your last line. You may wish to review this.
Marybell1.
Enjoy five stars.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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I have just read your poem "He thinks He's a Prince, which is meant to be a 5-7-5 poem. Unfortunately I have counted six syllables in your last line. You may wish to review this.
Marybell1.
Enjoy five stars.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for pointing that out. I can't believe how stupid I am.
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You are not stupid - I know I have been there - so I hope I'm not.
All the best
Marybell1.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks there is no bar, limit or end of thoughts, one can think of anything and everything and enjoy life, like thinking oneself a price; thoughts cannot change one's status; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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This speaks there is no bar, limit or end of thoughts, one can think of anything and everything and enjoy life, like thinking oneself a price; thoughts cannot change one's status; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thank you thanks for your comments
Comment from Brigitte Elko
A picture is worth a thousand words, especially in this case. It is not easy to paint a picture using three lines with a 5-7-5 requirement, you did it very well. Good luck in the contest. I believe I met this prince not too long ago!
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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A picture is worth a thousand words, especially in this case. It is not easy to paint a picture using three lines with a 5-7-5 requirement, you did it very well. Good luck in the contest. I believe I met this prince not too long ago!
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thanks for commenting
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Write a Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Sometimes you just have to tell it like it is.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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This is a good entry for the Write a Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Sometimes you just have to tell it like it is.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your comments
