Be With Me
Perceived differences melt away3 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Awww I really liked this one. It is a simple reminder to all that love and attraction happens when we least expect it and sometimes when we are lucky ---BOOM! you're all the way in. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Awww I really liked this one. It is a simple reminder to all that love and attraction happens when we least expect it and sometimes when we are lucky ---BOOM! you're all the way in. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thanks Kiwigirl for the read and the review. Comments much appreciated.
Comment from oliver818
This is an interesting take on the clean erotic poem. I think you did a good job, although I think a little setting could make it more erotic(but still clean) thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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This is an interesting take on the clean erotic poem. I think you did a good job, although I think a little setting could make it more erotic(but still clean) thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the thought. I will ponder.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good entry for the erotic poem.
Well written, well rhymed, it tells a complete story.
The picture is matches the poem perfectly.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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A good entry for the erotic poem.
Well written, well rhymed, it tells a complete story.
The picture is matches the poem perfectly.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
