Passion
Too hot to handle.3 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Well now mystery poet, who needs water indeed. This little sultry scene is going to end in a big splash I'm sure, but oh to be wet like that again, oops well you know what I mean. Great entry. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Well now mystery poet, who needs water indeed. This little sultry scene is going to end in a big splash I'm sure, but oh to be wet like that again, oops well you know what I mean. Great entry. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the great review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Well, alright, this is one poetry contest I won't win, because I've lost even before I enter. You win. Oh, yeah, you just got a thumbs up launched you into first. Hope you keep it. I bet you win, because this is a dynamic dramatic presentation of fiery love and passions and that photo is sensational emphasizing a love that's so hot. truly, liberty justice Good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Well, alright, this is one poetry contest I won't win, because I've lost even before I enter. You win. Oh, yeah, you just got a thumbs up launched you into first. Hope you keep it. I bet you win, because this is a dynamic dramatic presentation of fiery love and passions and that photo is sensational emphasizing a love that's so hot. truly, liberty justice Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Wow! Thanks so much for a fantastic review. Lots of competition though. Takes for the thumbs up : )
Comment from Bliss A
This is quite vivid and erotic. The yearning of the female body that does not listen to the warning signals sent out by the brain until all desire is satisfied. But I think there was a typo with:
"you(r) warm body...
who needs water? "
Or it might just be me. Nice one all the same, all the best
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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This is quite vivid and erotic. The yearning of the female body that does not listen to the warning signals sent out by the brain until all desire is satisfied. But I think there was a typo with:
"you(r) warm body...
who needs water? "
Or it might just be me. Nice one all the same, all the best
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you for pointing out that error, I really appreciate the help. Thank you also for such a nice review.
