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On Writing A Sonnet

Help for sonnet writers

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Comment from Susan X Smith
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I love poems about the art of writing and this is a good example. You seem to have touched on every aspect I can think of. I have never tried the sonnet form, but maybe now....

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

Comment from Gert sherwood
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Thank you very much jaybird1
for your tips of now to write a sonnet. And I will try to wake up my muse and help me write my thoughts
Gert

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

Comment from lauralumummu
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This is wonderful and inspiring for all sonnets writing want to be's. Your poem informative and lyrical at the same time. Thanks for sharing this, you are an artiste. Laura.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

Comment from crzypnter
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Thank you for sharing this well penned poem that is a great teaching tool for us writers. That a side this is also a wonderful stand alone poem. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your well-written, appealingly descriptive poem does provide some helpful comments about making sonnets effective through inclusion of
figures of speech and sound devices.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

Comment from Michele Harber
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What a clever idea, a sonnet about writing a sonnet. This is a very helpful and encouraging poem. Every writer should have your last line made into a poster, for those times when a momentarily missing muse has the writer doubting his or her own ability. (Note that I took your "always allow alliteration" point to heart.) Your rhymes are very well chosen. I was particularly impressed by "brevity"/"imagery" and "concentration"/"alliteration."

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

Comment from Sally Law
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Thank you, Jay. This is not only a lovely stand alone Sonnet, it is a wonderful teaching tool. I will save to my bookcase now.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

Comment from dragonpoet
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JLR,
You mention length of line, ususal subject, and syllable count but not iambic pentatmeter. Unless the lilt in the last quatrain is a brief mention of it.
Also most sonnets are written with an abab cdcd efef gg of an abba cddc effe gg rhyme scheme for Shakespearean of in the Plutachan rhyme scheme. Is this rhyme scheme a certain named form?
Keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

Comment from CrystieCookie999
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An encouraging poem with fairly regular meter going on here, to aid, assist, and allay the fears and discouragement of other like-minded sonnet-writers. I thought it was original to say that satire and similes would add clarity to a person's writing.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

Comment from Dancemom
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I just started writing sonnets myself, so this sonnet speaks to me. You have given very good advice on technique and the soul put into the work. This is well written. Great job and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020