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Comment from LIJ Red
I am not adept at reading your unusual style. Is it a voice to text app or just a different style? No matter, I see the outline of an excellent gory tale here.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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I am not adept at reading your unusual style. Is it a voice to text app or just a different style? No matter, I see the outline of an excellent gory tale here.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Right now I guess my writing would be considered voice to text as I talk it in or phone until next month Tyree stablish my wifi service and switch from Verizon to Comcast because they quoted me one price and then charge me a much higher price of and then pay the bill so they shut me off thanks for reviewing this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Sherman541
This is the most eerie story. Gruesome and sad in its own way. Very descriptive words that paint a very scary and sad picture of a life that was not happy or content to just be a man with a family. Yet, he seemed quite content with himself and his very own ideas. Good Job Sherman541
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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This is the most eerie story. Gruesome and sad in its own way. Very descriptive words that paint a very scary and sad picture of a life that was not happy or content to just be a man with a family. Yet, he seemed quite content with himself and his very own ideas. Good Job Sherman541
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Thanks Sherman I'm glad that you enjoy this doctor Ricky 1024
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you are welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the conclusive part of the fiction, so lively described, expressed the characters, it is interesting to read at the end of the street so scaring happened, all scared the happenings; I like. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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This speaks the conclusive part of the fiction, so lively described, expressed the characters, it is interesting to read at the end of the street so scaring happened, all scared the happenings; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thanks again for another one of your find review Al creator dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from RGstar
I read, and...trying to find the right words that would do the review justice, for it is what it is, and good to see an author doing something different and innovative in the way of d4elivery. Did I enjoy it? No time to, for I was figuring out if you were actually commenting on an actual film or it was something from own narrative and writing, perhaps a bit of both. Either way it reminded of the 80's famous 'house on street movies.
Yet, I sense the narrative coming from you, and it is delivered with excitement and passion for the subject matter.
Good to see.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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I read, and...trying to find the right words that would do the review justice, for it is what it is, and good to see an author doing something different and innovative in the way of d4elivery. Did I enjoy it? No time to, for I was figuring out if you were actually commenting on an actual film or it was something from own narrative and writing, perhaps a bit of both. Either way it reminded of the 80's famous 'house on street movies.
Yet, I sense the narrative coming from you, and it is delivered with excitement and passion for the subject matter.
Good to see.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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This was actually based on a haunted house that was in New Jersey that was famous for being haunted the idea was from a horror movie The House at the End of the Street the idea of Serial killings was my own and a reason it was considered true or non-fiction instead of fiction is because of people like Bundy people like caress Jim Jones all these people who got a kick out of killing and I see her eyes on the fact that it starts out with small animals because small animals are abused by mentally ill people on to do what the serial killers do course they have to be mentally ill especially Jeffrey Dahmer because not only did he murdering their heads off storm in a freezer that's why I didn't last long in jail people couldn't have scum like that around them even though they were considered the scum but they weren't quite is bad as him and a movie idea came from Liberty justice as it was in the peace at the beginning to think saying it would make for a good movie Hollywood Hollywood Hollywood but thanks for your review doctor Ricky 1024
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A new kind of presentation. Hats of to you.
Best wishes.
Comment from c_lucas
Red on black is extremely hard of old eyes to read. Mine gave out after the first few pages. At first, I thought you were writing about Dahmer, but I couldn't get deep enough to find out. When writing, think about contrast. What I did read, I thought was well done.
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The contrast is much better.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Red on black is extremely hard of old eyes to read. Mine gave out after the first few pages. At first, I thought you were writing about Dahmer, but I couldn't get deep enough to find out. When writing, think about contrast. What I did read, I thought was well done.
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The contrast is much better.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Got your Charlie I change the font to Black and turquoise dark which is my standard color usage but since this was graphic I use ready KTM red wine do something like that so recheck it so you can enjoy it thanks and have a nice holiday talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Another slice of horror from you Ricky I think this is really great you are doing really well keep writing, you are doing so well and so you only have up to go to from now,
Well done kind regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Another slice of horror from you Ricky I think this is really great you are doing really well keep writing, you are doing so well and so you only have up to go to from now,
Well done kind regards Meia xx
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thanks me and my next book on going to work on will be one of my two Wizard of Oz either to Return to Oz 2014 or The Wizard of Oz Revisited 2017 which I'm going to have to start writing there is one other one I forgot what it was called I actually started and got the idea by playing in The Wizard of Oz slots in Showboat which is closed here in Atlantic City and now that was probably about 8 years ago thanks my dear you have a wonderful day Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from kahpot
This is a wonderful story, although with a few spelling corrections this could be exceptional, if you could try and fix, Waiting "patintly" to patiently, and stumblestrips, to stumbles and trips, you have a great story here, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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This is a wonderful story, although with a few spelling corrections this could be exceptional, if you could try and fix, Waiting "patintly" to patiently, and stumblestrips, to stumbles and trips, you have a great story here, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thanks again k a h p o t this was talked into a cellphone there so there's bound to be a couple missed grammar issues that apparently was one of them thanks for that correction doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Ricky.
Well, mate, this is something different from you.
I laughed at the line about being a drinker and not a thinker. That's a great way to put it.
Scary stuff, here, my friend.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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G'day Ricky.
Well, mate, this is something different from you.
I laughed at the line about being a drinker and not a thinker. That's a great way to put it.
Scary stuff, here, my friend.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Why thanks Debbie ALU it's good to know that one great righter appreciate another great writer on this site talk to Ricky 1024 and you have a wonderful day
Comment from Cybertron1986
Wow. Utterly speechless. I adored the commanding and strong voice from the get-go. You maintained it all the way to the end, and it simply didn't let up. Each element of this appeals to both readers and fans of horror, such as myself. No doubter SIX stars
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Wow. Utterly speechless. I adored the commanding and strong voice from the get-go. You maintained it all the way to the end, and it simply didn't let up. Each element of this appeals to both readers and fans of horror, such as myself. No doubter SIX stars
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Why thanks very much Cybertron I'm glad you enjoy this I don't know if you caught the previous three parts of this book which changed not only by title but time but they are posted there but basically I some most of it up except for some Minor Details to give the reader who had never read the beginning books the gist of it and exactly Paladin's Force it's not the first time I've written something like this I wrote a book not completed about 8 years ago it was called Faith about a woman who commits suicide after her fiance dies trying to D bomb the pass during World War 3 in the Middle East God gives her One Wing lets her go to heaven even if she commits suicide in bathtub and tells her to earn the other Wing she must come back to earth on 100 Ventures as severe as facing Satan as minor as defending a grand father from a nasty grandson as I dug through and got a little bit more deeper I gave her not only to power the bear arms and defensive things but also the Earth Wind Fire and Water what she will need occasionally she also has a special gift so the Middle East the US forces are trapped gratefully outnumbered by the Middle East butchers so she's fluttering above and she gives a warning she she pulls her sword and States from about 150 yards up in the air if you do not cease and decease you all be killed they laugh at this person 100-pound Angel blonde hair fluttering about and start to take target practice on her what she easily deflects them with her Shield again she repeats the same warning with the same circumstances so finally after a constant barrage of bullet she gives up turns her Halo all the way up to the power of sun blinds and below and takes her time swooping down decapitating each and everyone 300 did Middle East soldiers and the u.s. force lives on this is called an example of woman power so let me know if you like that doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from kittykct
I gave this three stars because I think you worked hard on it and I think hard work deserves recognition. Out of the abundance of the heart, though. I cannot encourage this kind of work so I am not the best reviewer for it. Sorry.
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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I gave this three stars because I think you worked hard on it and I think hard work deserves recognition. Out of the abundance of the heart, though. I cannot encourage this kind of work so I am not the best reviewer for it. Sorry.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Thanks kitty cat for your honesty and review doctor Ricky 1024
