Wrong Girl
My son deserves better.26 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
What a mean, stupid woman. She got what she deserved, but her son and Dixie were innocent victims, so it has a mixed ending, a bit positive, a bit negative. Good idea and well written.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
What a mean, stupid woman. She got what she deserved, but her son and Dixie were innocent victims, so it has a mixed ending, a bit positive, a bit negative. Good idea and well written.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading, Phyllis.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Maria
= Oh, what an cold, unfeeling gal, all the way to her last meal.
= May she choke three-fold on her turkey leg!
= With a mom like her, who needed an enemy. Jeesh.
= Really good story.
Cheers, J
*** Merry Christmas & Happy New Year ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
Hi, Maria
= Oh, what an cold, unfeeling gal, all the way to her last meal.
= May she choke three-fold on her turkey leg!
= With a mom like her, who needed an enemy. Jeesh.
= Really good story.
Cheers, J
*** Merry Christmas & Happy New Year ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Maria Jose Garcia
Talk about drawing ones' full attention to me you wrote a horror story and very well written of ( by a fictional insane person could do)
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
Hello Maria Jose Garcia
Talk about drawing ones' full attention to me you wrote a horror story and very well written of ( by a fictional insane person could do)
Gert
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your review, Gert.
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You are welcome Maria Jose Garcia
Gert
Comment from robyn corum
'but the truth is I don't regret what I did.'
MJ,
Hey -- she STILL doesn't regret her actions? Even though they ended up killing her son also? Wow. That is a wicked witch of the highest order! Wouldn't want to cross her, for sure. *smile* Well-crafted piece that held my attention the whole way. Thanks!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
'but the truth is I don't regret what I did.'
MJ,
Hey -- she STILL doesn't regret her actions? Even though they ended up killing her son also? Wow. That is a wicked witch of the highest order! Wouldn't want to cross her, for sure. *smile* Well-crafted piece that held my attention the whole way. Thanks!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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She is indeed a wicked witch.
Thanks for reading.
Comment from patcelaw
This is so funny that it could well be classified as humor. I must say I guess I have a sick sense of humor, because I found it funny. Patricia
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
This is so funny that it could well be classified as humor. I must say I guess I have a sick sense of humor, because I found it funny. Patricia
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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I know what your mean, Patricia.
Thanks for reading.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Yeah, sometimes its strange the people we fall in love with. The son's mother didn't like him marrying a simple waitress, but he thought she was pretty and sweet. He could have married a more educated woman, but that's love. Suspenseful vivid descriptions. truly, liberty justice
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
Yeah, sometimes its strange the people we fall in love with. The son's mother didn't like him marrying a simple waitress, but he thought she was pretty and sweet. He could have married a more educated woman, but that's love. Suspenseful vivid descriptions. truly, liberty justice
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much for reading.