Reviews from

Wrong Girl

My son deserves better.

26 total reviews 
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a mean, stupid woman. She got what she deserved, but her son and Dixie were innocent victims, so it has a mixed ending, a bit positive, a bit negative. Good idea and well written.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thanks for reading, Phyllis.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi, Maria

= Oh, what an cold, unfeeling gal, all the way to her last meal.
= May she choke three-fold on her turkey leg!
= With a mom like her, who needed an enemy. Jeesh.
= Really good story.

Cheers, J
*** Merry Christmas & Happy New Year ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hello Maria Jose Garcia
Talk about drawing ones' full attention to me you wrote a horror story and very well written of ( by a fictional insane person could do)

Gert

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your review, Gert.
reply by Gert sherwood on 25-Nov-2017
    You are welcome Maria Jose Garcia
    Gert
Comment from robyn corum
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

'but the truth is I don't regret what I did.'

MJ,

Hey -- she STILL doesn't regret her actions? Even though they ended up killing her son also? Wow. That is a wicked witch of the highest order! Wouldn't want to cross her, for sure. *smile* Well-crafted piece that held my attention the whole way. Thanks!

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    She is indeed a wicked witch.
    Thanks for reading.
Comment from patcelaw
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is so funny that it could well be classified as humor. I must say I guess I have a sick sense of humor, because I found it funny. Patricia

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    I know what your mean, Patricia.
    Thanks for reading.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Yeah, sometimes its strange the people we fall in love with. The son's mother didn't like him marrying a simple waitress, but he thought she was pretty and sweet. He could have married a more educated woman, but that's love. Suspenseful vivid descriptions. truly, liberty justice

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thanks so much for reading.