Reviews from

Worst chat-up line ever.

How not to win friends and influence people

22 total reviews 
Comment from Cybertron1986
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This reminded me of the time my wife, who was coming home from work, gave up her seatbin the subway to a woman she thought was expecting. This piece pretty much was on target. Very funny :)

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thanks for reviewing. Much appreciated
Comment from Heather Knight
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Ouch! It's happened to me once or twice. And I've been on both sides of the conversation. I've been asked if I was pregnant and not long ago, I asked my goddaughter. I didn't know how to fix it afterwards, I felt like such a dork.
Thanks for sharing and making me smile.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thanks so much. I didn't get an answer from Tom. Did you?
reply by Heather Knight on 25-Nov-2017
    Yes, but he didn?t say much. Just that you should submit through the club.