Worst chat-up line ever.
How not to win friends and influence people22 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Well you are correct, this would have to be the worst pick up line that iv'e ever heard, but an excellent poem and entry, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Well you are correct, this would have to be the worst pick up line that iv'e ever heard, but an excellent poem and entry, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
DEFINITELY the worst chat up line EVER...either way it is offensive to the woman, made me laugh though especially with the funny picture. Kind regards and well done Meia xx
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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DEFINITELY the worst chat up line EVER...either way it is offensive to the woman, made me laugh though especially with the funny picture. Kind regards and well done Meia xx
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much
Comment from Joan E.
Your intriguing title and artwork selection certainly captured my attention. Your socially incorrect, one-liner made me laugh! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Your intriguing title and artwork selection certainly captured my attention. Your socially incorrect, one-liner made me laugh! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Well, it is a one line poem and it is the worst pick up line ever and the picture does match the poem, so I'll give you five stars.
Good luck to you with the competition.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Well, it is a one line poem and it is the worst pick up line ever and the picture does match the poem, so I'll give you five stars.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a fun write - humorous and succinct in its clever expression - complies perfectly with the prompt, and the picture, an added complement - best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, a fun write - humorous and succinct in its clever expression - complies perfectly with the prompt, and the picture, an added complement - best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for your comments
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You are very welcome...
Comment from Brigitte Elko
Great one line poem. Indeed, the worst pick up line I have ever read. The image selected is an awesome tribute to the words. Well done. It is not easy to tell a story in one line but you did it.
Brigitte
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Great one line poem. Indeed, the worst pick up line I have ever read. The image selected is an awesome tribute to the words. Well done. It is not easy to tell a story in one line but you did it.
Brigitte
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem. Those words will definitely make me kick some ass. To ask a Lady that will be better to just skip her than to humiliate her like that.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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A very well-written one-line poem. Those words will definitely make me kick some ass. To ask a Lady that will be better to just skip her than to humiliate her like that.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much.
Comment from H. Rebecca
This reviewer's having a bit of a problem with the post; a visceral reaction. I can't give it a poor rating, just because I disagree with the sentiment expressed in the sentence under the picture. If anyone used something similar on me, I'd leave them in the dust pronto
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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This reviewer's having a bit of a problem with the post; a visceral reaction. I can't give it a poor rating, just because I disagree with the sentiment expressed in the sentence under the picture. If anyone used something similar on me, I'd leave them in the dust pronto
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Hey, now that is so funny. Where did you find that hilarious photo? Message and tell me. What animals are those? I know that woman is so embarrassed and I didn't expect that funny line. truly liberty justice
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Hey, now that is so funny. Where did you find that hilarious photo? Message and tell me. What animals are those? I know that woman is so embarrassed and I didn't expect that funny line. truly liberty justice
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much. I found the picture on the fanArt cartoon page. Not sure what the animals are, some kind of bird, I guess.
Comment from mkflood
Roflmao..I love it. Thanks for selecting my work. It does work well together. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Great job and thanks again.. MKFlood
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Roflmao..I love it. Thanks for selecting my work. It does work well together. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Great job and thanks again.. MKFlood
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Hi mkFlood. I love your work . Thank you so much for allowing me to use your picture. I had looked at so many and was so relieved to find this one and thanks for the comments. Cheers Jen.
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Np Jen..I make available over 900 illustrations of a wide range of topics available to the writers here on fanstory. If ya get the time stop by YouTube.com and search "MKFlood Presents" to check out any of my 19 illustrated music videos. The admission is free. Thanks again..wink
