Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Wow! What a splendid photo of the owl. I liked your loop poem. And interesting how you tell of the owl playing the piano. All God's creatures play their own music for the Creator. Happy New Year friend.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for such a thoughtful review. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Elaine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This I delightful. Great job with your loop poem. Interesting choice of the snowy owl to help convey the Christmas message. An owl of creativity is charming, especially as it plays the songs of Christmas. A lovely and creative thought. Best wishes for a grand new year. Love the picture of the snow owl. judi

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for your encouraging review. Snowy owls are so beautiful. Elaine

reply by judiverse on 01-Jan-2018

You're very welcome. The one in the picture certainly was pretty. judi

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Mermaids, I know that this a challenging poetic form, but you executed it superbly. The lines do not seem forced. Also, the looped words seem to flow naturally and make sense.

I think you picked the perfect topic to write a loop poem--Christmas music.

Thank you for sharing. Happy New Year!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Such a beautiful creature and I have seen many owls as they have a sanctuary in my home town, a great tribute and well worded, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for such encouraging words. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! Elaine

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

That owl--those talons...
I'll just bet'cha he's just burning up those ivories on that Baby Grand Piano with some fowl tunes, Mermaids.
Good loop-de-loop.

~Dean

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Hahaha! Love the pic! Have a Happy New Year. Elaine

reply by Dean Kuch on 27-Dec-2017

You do the same, Elaine.
You're more than welcome.
~Dean :)

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading your loop poem. I love this form of poetry. I think it is such fun as well as challenging to write. Good job and great picture.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written loop poem. The lines flow well from the one to the next. The loop words are well chosen and bring the Christmas music alive in our heads while reading.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Sylvia Kennedy

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your writing. You interested me as you repeated
your ending line with your next word. It is apparent that you are
expressive in your writing. I hope you continue to venture in your
expression in your writing.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is an interesting story in your loop poem.
You have the loop structure down pretty good.
Well done. The picture is beautiful as well.
Sharon

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Slowly by degrees the owl brings forth the joy and newness, happiness.
I liked the poem and enjoyed the Christmas music, harmony and balance.
DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine