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Cinquain Poem23 total reviews
Comment from Unspoken94
I could sense the feeling as if I were in the boat.
I am an avid fisherman and you watch the water
constantly and throw toward any action. A wonderful
cinquain and I wish you well in the contest. -Bill Stephenson
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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I could sense the feeling as if I were in the boat.
I am an avid fisherman and you watch the water
constantly and throw toward any action. A wonderful
cinquain and I wish you well in the contest. -Bill Stephenson
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Hi Bill, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. Your encouraging comments, understanding of fishing as a past time and contest wishes are all very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Cinquain Poem contest.
You definitely have a clear story here and the picture is beautiful.
I for one 'would rather be fishing'.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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This is a good entry for the Cinquain Poem contest.
You definitely have a clear story here and the picture is beautiful.
I for one 'would rather be fishing'.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thank you Sharon. Your comments on my Cinquain Poem are very much appreciated. Blessings ~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very clever ~ "pensive thought ~ fishing." Good transition line: "I concentrate harder." The image is gorgeous and perfect for your poem. Much luck in the contest with this great entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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This is very clever ~ "pensive thought ~ fishing." Good transition line: "I concentrate harder." The image is gorgeous and perfect for your poem. Much luck in the contest with this great entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Hi Marilyn, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. Your encouraging comments and contest wishes are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day DD.
I wish I had a six left, mate. This is a beauty and the picture made me want to go camping and fishing.
These little pieces are way out of my league, because I'm so verbose, but you've nailed here, my friend.
A great contest entry and I wish you lots of luck in it.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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G'day DD.
I wish I had a six left, mate. This is a beauty and the picture made me want to go camping and fishing.
These little pieces are way out of my league, because I'm so verbose, but you've nailed here, my friend.
A great contest entry and I wish you lots of luck in it.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Thank you Fez for your review. Your mention of a six star is again out of my reach. Maybe I?ll strike it lucky with you one day or I?m happy to wait until the sixers are replenished and you are flush. ~DD
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Yes, mate. I'll add you to my white board. Everything you write deserves a six and I kick myself each time.
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Thanks Fez, I appreciate the thought. ~DD
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I just updated the white board. Hopefully, now, I won't forget. Gettin' old I think.
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We?re all there Fez :-)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, DD
= Excellent entry for the contest.
= What's not to love about fishing? Nothing.
= Of course, for me, I like the old bamboo pole with the bobber.
= Good Luck.
Cheers, J
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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Hi, DD
= Excellent entry for the contest.
= What's not to love about fishing? Nothing.
= Of course, for me, I like the old bamboo pole with the bobber.
= Good Luck.
Cheers, J
*** Merry Christmas & Happy New Year ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Thank you Jax. I?m curious, did you really mean to offer the four star? Would appreciate some advice on how to improve my Cinquain poem if so. ~DD
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= OMGoodness--no. I'm so sorry, my finger just get trigger-happy. I usually check before I sent, but it just got by me.
= I went in and changed it, so let me know if it went through. (*<*)
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Thank you Jax. So glad it was due to fat fingers. It has happened to me before where it was a mistake so I felt the need to check to be sure. Thank you so much for amending your review. ~DDxx
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If I do it again, which I hope I do NOT. Please, just let me know, and I will happily change it. (*<*)
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Will do Jax. Thanks again :-) ~DDx
Comment from sfharper
I like the details that place me in fishing mode, the fishing line and the splash. I like the play on ideas too, the sense that the splash might have been a light bulb, idea going off in your thinking process. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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I like the details that place me in fishing mode, the fishing line and the splash. I like the play on ideas too, the sense that the splash might have been a light bulb, idea going off in your thinking process. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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sfharper, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. Your encouraging comments and enjoyment of my poem are very much appreciated. ~DD
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You're welcome DD
Comment from GSmuse
Short, but a Cinquain format dictates brevity. I liked the wording and can identify with the feeling of holding the Nylon thread to see if there is any tug or movement. You captured the essence of the moment. Thank you!! Gems
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Short, but a Cinquain format dictates brevity. I liked the wording and can identify with the feeling of holding the Nylon thread to see if there is any tug or movement. You captured the essence of the moment. Thank you!! Gems
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Hi Gems, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. Your encouraging comments are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Ricky1024
Listen Cinquain contest entry prompt on fishing it was short to the point with great descriptive measures there was no grammar issues theme and imagery were wonderful adjective content and objective contents word for good also thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024 and good luck
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Listen Cinquain contest entry prompt on fishing it was short to the point with great descriptive measures there was no grammar issues theme and imagery were wonderful adjective content and objective contents word for good also thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024 and good luck
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Ricky, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. Your encouraging comments are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Joy Graham
Your cinquain describes the scene perfectly. I can hear the splash and can feel the excitement of waiting for you to reel in your catch. Excellent picture, message, and good syllables in each line. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Your cinquain describes the scene perfectly. I can hear the splash and can feel the excitement of waiting for you to reel in your catch. Excellent picture, message, and good syllables in each line. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Hello Joy, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. Your encouraging comments and contest wishes are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from zanya
Yes an interlude spent fishing with all its calm and delight and most of all expectation 'A splash/breaks the surface ' shared here in this Cinquain - great pic
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Yes an interlude spent fishing with all its calm and delight and most of all expectation 'A splash/breaks the surface ' shared here in this Cinquain - great pic
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Zanya, thank you kindly for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. Your encouraging comments are very much appreciated. ~DD
