~ Hooked ~
Cinquain Poem23 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
I love the pun on the closing - fishing for fish as well as for deeper thoughts. Clever metaphor! Well voiced in true to form style, and also with good word economy and a fine presentation. Superb consonance of S and soft C
Perfect. No nits. Good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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I love the pun on the closing - fishing for fish as well as for deeper thoughts. Clever metaphor! Well voiced in true to form style, and also with good word economy and a fine presentation. Superb consonance of S and soft C
Perfect. No nits. Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
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Thank you RD, I appreciate your comments : -) ~ DD
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Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
It put a smile on my face so early in the morning for I thought of my departed one who love to fish . He loved surf fishing.
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
It put a smile on my face so early in the morning for I thought of my departed one who love to fish . He loved surf fishing.
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you MissCookie. I really appreciated reading your review on my Cinquain poem. I?m so pleased you enjoyed it. ~DDxox
Your'e very welcome, ave a nice evening.
Cookie
Comment from Pantygynt
The pursuit of of peace is the only way I can understand this sport but you have expressed it here very adequately and withing the rules of the cinquain form.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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The pursuit of of peace is the only way I can understand this sport but you have expressed it here very adequately and withing the rules of the cinquain form.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your review Pantygynt. I enjoy calm water fishing as I find it quite meditative. Different story on taking it off the hook though. Having said that I haven?t had a fish for a long while now. ~DD
Comment from Aussie
Wonderful photo to compliment your poem. From one fisherwoman to another fisherman - I loved your cinquain. Fishing is so relaxing and exciting when you get a bite. I grew up in a fishing family. Good luck in the contest! XX
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Wonderful photo to compliment your poem. From one fisherwoman to another fisherman - I loved your cinquain. Fishing is so relaxing and exciting when you get a bite. I grew up in a fishing family. Good luck in the contest! XX
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much K. I loved reading your review, receiving your six stars and learning of your appreciation for fishing. I grew up fishing with family as a kid and do find it therapeutic when I get a chance to fish - moments few and far between. ~DDxox
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your cinquain poem "Hooked". You followed all the rules for this genre and I liked your choice of picture,.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed reading your cinquain poem "Hooked". You followed all the rules for this genre and I liked your choice of picture,.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Marybell, thank you for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. Your comments and contest wishes are very much appreciated. ~DD
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from doggymad
I think you have captured the satisfaction that people derive from fishing here in this short work.
I could never understand the appeal of sitting for long periods of time waiting for a fish. But of course for some there is a particular serenity in just sitting quietly
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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I think you have captured the satisfaction that people derive from fishing here in this short work.
I could never understand the appeal of sitting for long periods of time waiting for a fish. But of course for some there is a particular serenity in just sitting quietly
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Hi Freda, thank you for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. I do like to fish in still waters - very meditative. Much more fun than watching the cricket : -) ~DD
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi DD, This is a six but I'm all out. You capture fishing to a tee this is exactly what it is like when fishing Loved the' nylon thread held in pensive thought' as you do think of many things waiting for that tug on the line. Well done I hope you do well it deserves too, a great cinquain and meets all requirements Good luck Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Hi DD, This is a six but I'm all out. You capture fishing to a tee this is exactly what it is like when fishing Loved the' nylon thread held in pensive thought' as you do think of many things waiting for that tug on the line. Well done I hope you do well it deserves too, a great cinquain and meets all requirements Good luck Cheers Christine
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Hi Chrissy, thank you so much for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. I really enjoyed reading your encouraging comments and mention of a six. It meant a lot to me. Thank you also for your contest wishes, they too were much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Liberty Justice
"Hooked" what a beautiful title describing this man as he fishes. Words are clear and precise and tell the tale of how he catches his dinner. Poem is short, sweet, and to the point. truly, liberty justice
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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"Hooked" what a beautiful title describing this man as he fishes. Words are clear and precise and tell the tale of how he catches his dinner. Poem is short, sweet, and to the point. truly, liberty justice
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Hi Liberty Justice, thank you so much for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. Your encouraging comments are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinquain. An exciting way to spend great time in nature. While relaxing we can catch ourselves a nutritious dinner while enjoy a very good time.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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A very well-written Cinquain. An exciting way to spend great time in nature. While relaxing we can catch ourselves a nutritious dinner while enjoy a very good time.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Sandra, thank you for taking the time to review my Cinquain poem. Your comments are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from closetpoetjester
Yep there's a LOT riding on that little piece of string haha
I loved the splash this made but also the enduring patience and dare I say it...baited breath with which this was cast.
Well done girl!
My last sixer! Yay! Good luck Miss Pensive Thought haha
Pxx
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Yep there's a LOT riding on that little piece of string haha
I loved the splash this made but also the enduring patience and dare I say it...baited breath with which this was cast.
Well done girl!
My last sixer! Yay! Good luck Miss Pensive Thought haha
Pxx
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Love your review P. Thank you for giving me your last six too. I was lucky to fish that one out of you as others had already given up their haul too. I enjoyed your play on words - entertained me hook, line and sinker (not sure if that made any sense in my sentence but I'm using it!). ~DDxox
