Conscious Challenge
Rhyming Alliteration19 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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This is a good poem and the picture first caught my eye. you have done very well I wish you the best of luck in the competition kind regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Posting pictures with your files
Captures charming writing styles,
Reviews received globally.
This is a good poem and the picture first caught my eye. you have done very well I wish you the best of luck in the competition kind regards Meia xx
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Hi Meia Thanks for your review and good wishes for the contest Cheers
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem with great alliteration. Each of us dream to write the perfect poem that will end up in the literature books to teach aspirant poets of the future.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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A very well-written rhyming poem with great alliteration. Each of us dream to write the perfect poem that will end up in the literature books to teach aspirant poets of the future.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Hi Sandra, yes a bit of fun it took a while to get the syllable count correct so many versions to check with and many different from the other so it can be confusing .One day a perfect poem LOL Thanks for your review Cheers
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about conscious challenge, writing pleasures and how after knitting words in rhythms with rhymes making poetry and other writing published and interestingly reviews receive for the works in styles; I liked.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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This speaks about conscious challenge, writing pleasures and how after knitting words in rhythms with rhymes making poetry and other writing published and interestingly reviews receive for the works in styles; I liked.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Hi Alcreator Litt Dear. Thanks for your review I had fun writng this and trying to get the syllable count correct glad you liked it Cheers
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a super poem with excellent alliteration. All of us strive to write something that is mutually appealing to ourselves and those who read it. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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This is a super poem with excellent alliteration. All of us strive to write something that is mutually appealing to ourselves and those who read it. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Hi Marilyn, Thanks for reading and reviewing this poem it was fun to have a go at this contest and I appreciate ypir commemts and much luck Cheers
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good entry for the Rhyming Alliterisen writing prompt.
This is not easy, I gave it a try but haven't come up with anything good yet.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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A good entry for the Rhyming Alliterisen writing prompt.
This is not easy, I gave it a try but haven't come up with anything good yet.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Hi Sharon, Yes it was challlenging and I had fun coming up with this I hope you do write something Good luck with your efforts Thanks for reading mine .Cheers
Comment from victor 66
Thinking about entering this contest, I read several poems entered. This was the only one of which I thought to respond. ;Your poem flows very nicely and it's enjoyable. Reading it a second time, I don't know if I'd really be able to equal yours. Good look in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
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Thinking about entering this contest, I read several poems entered. This was the only one of which I thought to respond. ;Your poem flows very nicely and it's enjoyable. Reading it a second time, I don't know if I'd really be able to equal yours. Good look in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
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Hi Victor . Thank you. What a lovely compliment but please do enter I am sure you will come up with one to rival this LOL Many Cheers for your great review
Comment from Ellie707
Wow! You did a fantastic job with the alliteration, but making it rhyme makes it even more difficult.
The woman's image is thoughtful, yet looks a bit bored.
Great job!
Eliie
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
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Wow! You did a fantastic job with the alliteration, but making it rhyme makes it even more difficult.
The woman's image is thoughtful, yet looks a bit bored.
Great job!
Eliie
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
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Hi Ellie, Thanks for your review and encouraging words. Hopefully more thoughtful than bored LOL cheers
Comment from sfharper
A nice contemplative poem about the experience of writing poetry online. It uses good rhyme and good consonance. You might pick a stronger word for "some" and decided upon the punctuation.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
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A nice contemplative poem about the experience of writing poetry online. It uses good rhyme and good consonance. You might pick a stronger word for "some" and decided upon the punctuation.
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
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Hi sdharper Thanks for your review ai will revisit this and see if I can be creative and also punctuate Cheers
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you are welcome
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Have changed the line and I think this is better Cheers
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you're welcome
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
This seems to be a great entry for the Rhyming Alliterisen contest. So far, yours is the only one I have read that completely mastered the challenge. YAY!
One question -- why is Rhythm capitalized?
Thanks and good luck!
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
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Dear Mystery Poet,
This seems to be a great entry for the Rhyming Alliterisen contest. So far, yours is the only one I have read that completely mastered the challenge. YAY!
One question -- why is Rhythm capitalized?
Thanks and good luck!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
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Hi Robyn Thanks very much for your review and encouraging words Opps I will correct Rhythm straight away Thanks Cheers MO
