Laws Of Caustic Cause
Just a fun poem.41 total reviews
Comment from Michelle D. Carr
I need to read this several times over the next few days. There are truths here which are necessary . Thank you so much for this terrific writing which conveys so much.
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I need to read this several times over the next few days. There are truths here which are necessary . Thank you so much for this terrific writing which conveys so much.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
Comment from Wendy G
Every stanza is compelling - you have a way of selecting and arranging words with both striking power and beauty. The reader is forced to pause and reflect, and acknowledge the accuracy of what you say in this clever write. Your last five lines are an imperative in today's world.
Wendy
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Every stanza is compelling - you have a way of selecting and arranging words with both striking power and beauty. The reader is forced to pause and reflect, and acknowledge the accuracy of what you say in this clever write. Your last five lines are an imperative in today's world.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
Comment from forestport12
You certainly have a way of saying things and stringing together words that are pearls. Pearls of words and wisdom, you say in ways no one else has. The only thing is toward the end or to sum it up, it seemed a little canned. But so powerful the way you push our minds eye and fuse emotion, like no other.
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You certainly have a way of saying things and stringing together words that are pearls. Pearls of words and wisdom, you say in ways no one else has. The only thing is toward the end or to sum it up, it seemed a little canned. But so powerful the way you push our minds eye and fuse emotion, like no other.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
A bad day can mean a bad week, and so forth. I do believe we can turn a negative into a positive if we work at it. It doesn't come easy. Thank you for reposting this for us.
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A bad day can mean a bad week, and so forth. I do believe we can turn a negative into a positive if we work at it. It doesn't come easy. Thank you for reposting this for us.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2023
Comment from Enrico Langfordino
Six stars for imaginative writing Easy'. Love it, its messages and its presentation. Full of solid advice, though I find sublimity in the metre and the rhyme. Quite a wonderful write.
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Six stars for imaginative writing Easy'. Love it, its messages and its presentation. Full of solid advice, though I find sublimity in the metre and the rhyme. Quite a wonderful write.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well, this made a me contemplate the unwritten laws of the universe.
I know it's short, but that makes this line no less brilliant:
These are the little riddles in the middle of insane
Nice work!
D
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Well, this made a me contemplate the unwritten laws of the universe.
I know it's short, but that makes this line no less brilliant:
These are the little riddles in the middle of insane
Nice work!
D
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I'm not too sure of the meaning of your title (sounds a bit clumsy to me) so I start at a disadvantage. But I get the advice being handed out in, as ever, your well crafted poetry. The last stanza drives home a very topical issue that 'truths' can be conflicting and, perhaps, care should be taken when one is chosen. Certainly in today's climate. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
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I'm not too sure of the meaning of your title (sounds a bit clumsy to me) so I start at a disadvantage. But I get the advice being handed out in, as ever, your well crafted poetry. The last stanza drives home a very topical issue that 'truths' can be conflicting and, perhaps, care should be taken when one is chosen. Certainly in today's climate. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
Comment from ronnie k
Exceptional, this is are for me one of my better reads, I loved the poetic tones, loved the defining poetry line, not one line but each and every line, thanks for sharing, a must keep.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Exceptional, this is are for me one of my better reads, I loved the poetic tones, loved the defining poetry line, not one line but each and every line, thanks for sharing, a must keep.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much ronnie k. tom
Comment from Gert sherwood
easyeverett1
smiles your poem about truth was fun to read with your abab rhyme and to me you are asking us---
Should one build a fence
of honesty and truth to stay
around them every day;
without gazing through
sheltered bars in their way
This is part of a poem that I wrote.
Gert
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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easyeverett1
smiles your poem about truth was fun to read with your abab rhyme and to me you are asking us---
Should one build a fence
of honesty and truth to stay
around them every day;
without gazing through
sheltered bars in their way
This is part of a poem that I wrote.
Gert
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you Gert. tom
Comment from rjuselius
Wow, this is an absolutely outstanding piece of poetry dear easyeverett1! I haven't read something so profound in a while. Bravo and best wishes!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Wow, this is an absolutely outstanding piece of poetry dear easyeverett1! I haven't read something so profound in a while. Bravo and best wishes!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much Rebekka. Sorry I am so late in my response but had puter trouble. Thanks again my friend. tom
