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A 2-4-2 poem.18 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Ine, a hard day at work...and finally the day is over...time to go home and have some hot chocolate...and rest...very well written sweet girl...love your poem...and love the picture...love your Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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HI Ine, a hard day at work...and finally the day is over...time to go home and have some hot chocolate...and rest...very well written sweet girl...love your poem...and love the picture...love your Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend.
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your always so welcome...xxoo love
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 Poem. Our daily routine to go to work and labour hard every day antil the day is over and we rush home to eat and rest to start again the whole process the next day.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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A very well-written 2-4-2 Poem. Our daily routine to go to work and labour hard every day antil the day is over and we rush home to eat and rest to start again the whole process the next day.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind and understanding review, Ine. Have a good week.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Robina
clever 2-4-2 entry for this contest
it sounds like all work, no play yes, I know it's time to race home
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Hello Robina
clever 2-4-2 entry for this contest
it sounds like all work, no play yes, I know it's time to race home
Gert
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind and understanding review, Ine. Have a good week.
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Hello Robina
You are welcome You have a pleasant weekend
Gert
Comment from Joan E.
I believe you were inspired by VMarguarite's artwork to create this tiny 2-4-2 poem. I also think you may have been reflecting on your own busy schedule! Smiles and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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I believe you were inspired by VMarguarite's artwork to create this tiny 2-4-2 poem. I also think you may have been reflecting on your own busy schedule! Smiles and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind and understanding review, Ine. Have a good week.
Comment from lyenochka
I hope you don't have to shovel snow already. I like your 2-4-2 because after the "hard labour's done," somehow the joy of going home gives enough energy to "race home."
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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I hope you don't have to shovel snow already. I like your 2-4-2 because after the "hard labour's done," somehow the joy of going home gives enough energy to "race home."
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. No we don't have snow yet.
Comment from c_lucas
When your labor for the day is completed, one should retire to their home for a much needed rest. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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When your labor for the day is completed, one should retire to their home for a much needed rest. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image.
-Syllable count is good.
-Snow does create hard,
back breaking work.
-But when it's done,
you go home, relax,
and have hot chocolate!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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-Nice image.
-Syllable count is good.
-Snow does create hard,
back breaking work.
-But when it's done,
you go home, relax,
and have hot chocolate!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
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You are welcome. You do the same.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good 2-4-2 poem for the contest.
That's pretty much what I think of winter. All work, race home to sleep or hibernate.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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A good 2-4-2 poem for the contest.
That's pretty much what I think of winter. All work, race home to sleep or hibernate.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. It's short, sweet, and to the point. An excellent entry for this type of contest. I so miss snow. Living in Texas it hardly ever snows. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. It's short, sweet, and to the point. An excellent entry for this type of contest. I so miss snow. Living in Texas it hardly ever snows. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Many thanks for your kind and understanding review, Ine. Have a nice week.
Comment from royowen
A nicely written 2/4/2 poetry contest entry Ine. Yes, indeed shovelling snow is hard work unless snow doesn't actually fall, which is the case here in Australia, well done, great job, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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A nicely written 2/4/2 poetry contest entry Ine. Yes, indeed shovelling snow is hard work unless snow doesn't actually fall, which is the case here in Australia, well done, great job, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Many thanks for your kind and understanding review, Ine. Have a nice week
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Welcome Ine.
