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Lonely

Losing a mother is being alone forever.

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Comment from tocurie
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very touching. I can relate to it completely good read, good presentation. Well done. My aunt had been cremated too. All now have a bit of her shared within the family of 9 kids.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2017

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
    Thank you for reading and sharing with me your personal story.
    Blessings,
    brigitte
reply by tocurie on 20-Nov-2017

    in your heart, you will not be lonely, because that shared love can never be taken away.
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    Sorry about the repeats. Don't know how that happened.
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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A brilliant and harrowing poem.

I could feel your sense of loss, and yet your belief that she is where you will one day go, carrying with her all that made her who she was.

Meanwhile, the greatest achievement of her life stays behind as her legacy.

Great job in nailing the emotion of the loss of your mother.

Take care,
Rhonda

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
    This was tough to write. I always write straight from the heart...sometimes with tears dropping.
    Thank you for reading and reviewing. Hope I nailed Lonely for contest.
    Blessings,
    Brigitte
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 20-Nov-2017
    I felt the tears, my friend!! I truly did!

    Good luck in the contest!! It's a winner in my heart.
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 20-Nov-2017
    I felt the tears, my friend!! I truly did!

    Good luck in the contest!! It's a winner in my heart.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
    Thank you so much. This was hard to put on paper.
    Blessings,
    brigitte
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Hi, Brigitte;
Thank you for sharing your poem with your Mom and your daily contact with her - even though she has gone on.

I so wish I had an urn for my Mom's ashes. Instead, she sits in a planter box - (my siblings and I split up the ashes so we would all have her with us.) I will plant her with my roses at my new house.

~patty~

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2017

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
    This was tough to write. You know, I write from the heart, I know no other way..
    Blessings friend,
    Brigitte