Chance Encounter(s)
From the book, Fortune Cookies. El attracts hungry shadows9 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I identify with the cassette of the 80's and how to rewind them...lol. It's interesting how you have the singing going along with the scenerios. Clever.
The ending is fascinating.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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I identify with the cassette of the 80's and how to rewind them...lol. It's interesting how you have the singing going along with the scenerios. Clever.
The ending is fascinating.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I hardly visit here because I don?t anticipate anyone reviewing my writing. Your time and review is a pleasant surprise and I?m appreciative of your comments. Thank you!
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your El character from another post. The opening of the scene, with the hand coming into view, was quite compelling. Your use of dialog is very effective and your concluding paragraph is very dramatic. Sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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I admired your El character from another post. The opening of the scene, with the hand coming into view, was quite compelling. Your use of dialog is very effective and your concluding paragraph is very dramatic. Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Thank you! This was an unexpected and welcomed surprise to receive your review. Thank you again!
Comment from kahpot
I have finally caught a catch-up read, but still unable to get the very beginning, Can you help me? as I love this story and went to read your latest chapter (13) but I am missing some and cannot find in your portfolio, I try and try but I am still behind****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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I have finally caught a catch-up read, but still unable to get the very beginning, Can you help me? as I love this story and went to read your latest chapter (13) but I am missing some and cannot find in your portfolio, I try and try but I am still behind****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Thank you, kahpot! I?ll be sure to send you a link to the chapters as soon as I arrive home from work tonight. I tried attempting to locate the novel as well without logging onto my account, but found its kinda tricky. Thank you again! Your interest does motivate me to complete this. Have a blessed day.
Comment from Rasmine
Cool. I can't wait to read the next chapter, and possible it is in my messages.
I hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving! :) Have a good night and a good day, see you soon!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Cool. I can't wait to read the next chapter, and possible it is in my messages.
I hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving! :) Have a good night and a good day, see you soon!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
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Awesome. Happy Thanksgiving!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a general course of living, one who is fond of reading goes with the comic book and then goes on listening to the song, its melody has caused something serious and pleasant action; I liked.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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This speaks a general course of living, one who is fond of reading goes with the comic book and then goes on listening to the song, its melody has caused something serious and pleasant action; I liked.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Awesome. Thank you for a kind review!
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Awesome. Thank you for a kind review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A chilling ghostly write and this chance encounter of dark shadows are reminders that life is short, an intriguing write of dark and light, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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A chilling ghostly write and this chance encounter of dark shadows are reminders that life is short, an intriguing write of dark and light, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Sweet! Thank you for a kind and generous review!
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Sweet! Thank you for a kind and generous review!
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
This is haunting. So, if I have it right, El is the girl who dies - based on her Japanese heritage, she has just lost face, so she might kill herself OR has El murdered someone?
How did the girl walking down the hall 'see' the figures in the room?
Very interesting piece,
~patty~
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
This is haunting. So, if I have it right, El is the girl who dies - based on her Japanese heritage, she has just lost face, so she might kill herself OR has El murdered someone?
How did the girl walking down the hall 'see' the figures in the room?
Very interesting piece,
~patty~
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Hi!
Actually, El is the main character who has the power to see beyond the norm. Chihiro, the Japanese student and daughter of a millionaire, is in love with him, but El doesn?t know how to react with that.
The spirit girl is a murdered soul, who haunts the dorms, and is trapped because of a demon that keeps her locked there.
The soul lurks close to El because, she knows El is the only person who can help her.
Hope that helps. This script kinda skips to events that are way later from the book.
Thank you for the kind review.
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Hi!
Actually, El is the main character who has the power to see beyond the norm. Chihiro, the Japanese student and daughter of a millionaire, is in love with him, but El doesn?t know how to react with that.
The spirit girl is a murdered soul, who haunts the dorms, and is trapped because of a demon that keeps her locked there.
The soul lurks close to El because, she knows El is the only person who can help her.
Hope that helps. This script kinda skips to events that are way later from the book.
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think that this is a very good script.
It is vivid and easy to picture.
The dialogue is good and easy to follow.
Well done and good luck to you.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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I think that this is a very good script.
It is vivid and easy to picture.
The dialogue is good and easy to follow.
Well done and good luck to you.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Awesome! Thank you for the generous and kind review.
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Awesome! Thank you for the generous and kind review.
Comment from pbomar1115
El is visited by a Japanese girl who presents him flowers. She makes a move on him by kissing him. Then she runs away after getting the response any girl would expect after what she did. I hope I'm not wrong but the girl fetched the ghost.
Phillip
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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El is visited by a Japanese girl who presents him flowers. She makes a move on him by kissing him. Then she runs away after getting the response any girl would expect after what she did. I hope I'm not wrong but the girl fetched the ghost.
Phillip
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Sweet! Almost got it. The ghost, or soul actually lurks the dorm because, years ago she was murdered there. El is the only one who can save her soul. Chihiro, the Japanese girl, is in love with El, but can?t see, or feel anything that deals with paranormal.
Thank you for the kind review!
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Sweet! Almost got it. The ghost, or soul actually lurks the dorm because, years ago she was murdered there. El is the only one who can save her soul. Chihiro, the Japanese girl, is in love with El, but can?t see, or feel anything that deals with paranormal.
Thank you for the kind review!
