Smokey and I went to the woods.
A free verse about this happening (?)22 total reviews
Comment from Ronni
Great you had a nice day in woods with Smokey, and the bag problem fixed
by your kind and thoughtful friend. Friendship and fresh air won the day.
Thanks for sharing...
Best wishes, Ronni
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
Great you had a nice day in woods with Smokey, and the bag problem fixed
by your kind and thoughtful friend. Friendship and fresh air won the day.
Thanks for sharing...
Best wishes, Ronni
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from c_lucas
It does not matter how one spends their days. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
It does not matter how one spends their days. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Irish Rain
That sounds just wonderful, and Smokey is such a little cutie!! Loved reading about your day in the woods with Smokey, blessings....
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
That sounds just wonderful, and Smokey is such a little cutie!! Loved reading about your day in the woods with Smokey, blessings....
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from TAB_that's me
How fun to have a little carrier for Smokey that hooks to your scoot mobile. I bet he loves it! You treat him like a king!
teresa
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
How fun to have a little carrier for Smokey that hooks to your scoot mobile. I bet he loves it! You treat him like a king!
teresa
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from rheabug
You have fun with Smokey and that is a great thing. I love the poems and stories about your adventures with Smokey. I have two dogs that give me enormous pleasure with their actions. HUGS
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
You have fun with Smokey and that is a great thing. I love the poems and stories about your adventures with Smokey. I have two dogs that give me enormous pleasure with their actions. HUGS
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Joan E.
I relished your photograph taken from the scooter--I felt I was in the woods with you and Smokey. Best wishes in the Free Verse contest and sweet dreams about the trees- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
I relished your photograph taken from the scooter--I felt I was in the woods with you and Smokey. Best wishes in the Free Verse contest and sweet dreams about the trees- Joan
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Like you I walk with my dogs daily, Ine. Weather permitting, of course. I can handle walking in nearly any kind of weather except rain.
We walk the trails of a large wooded area at the end of a huge field right behind my home.
It is the highlight of their day, and mine too, most times.
We've had doe and fawns cross our paths, and the doggies chase rabbits and squirrels foraging for food to sustain them through the bitterly frigid winter months.
I will continue to walk them as long as I am physically able.
I hope you do the same for your canine companion, Smokey. Best wishes to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
Like you I walk with my dogs daily, Ine. Weather permitting, of course. I can handle walking in nearly any kind of weather except rain.
We walk the trails of a large wooded area at the end of a huge field right behind my home.
It is the highlight of their day, and mine too, most times.
We've had doe and fawns cross our paths, and the doggies chase rabbits and squirrels foraging for food to sustain them through the bitterly frigid winter months.
I will continue to walk them as long as I am physically able.
I hope you do the same for your canine companion, Smokey. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. See your little doggy likes a Turkey too.
Comment from patcelaw
This was an interesting read. it is wonderfully worded and presented in a way that it makes it easy for my sick eyes to read. Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
This was an interesting read. it is wonderfully worded and presented in a way that it makes it easy for my sick eyes to read. Patricia
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm sure Smokey enjoyed his ride as much as I enjoyed reading.
The following line needs fixed, wrong word after fitted.
no way it fitted IN the scoot mobile.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
I'm sure Smokey enjoyed his ride as much as I enjoyed reading.
The following line needs fixed, wrong word after fitted.
no way it fitted IN the scoot mobile.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What a wonderful happening and a great free verse with occasional rhyme. Nice story and a great picture to go with it. He seems very happy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
What a wonderful happening and a great free verse with occasional rhyme. Nice story and a great picture to go with it. He seems very happy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.