Fragile
Remembering past Christmases24 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smile Maria Jose Garcia
I like how you felt and still feel of what is FRAGILE especially the nativity scene made from clay after many year of how they just seem to decay ( I had one and had to replace it)
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Smile Maria Jose Garcia
I like how you felt and still feel of what is FRAGILE especially the nativity scene made from clay after many year of how they just seem to decay ( I had one and had to replace it)
Gert
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading, Gert.
Comment from smileycloud
your lovely free verse poetry is so full of magic but alas the sadness is so real as well
very fine work to take the reader into a child's childhood home and dreams so vividly with your word imagery and your excellent expression of feelings and emotions
I know that the child in us loses the exuberance for the magical things but it is certainly replaced with the sublime
the little character in yiur story is so very real and endearing
blessings
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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your lovely free verse poetry is so full of magic but alas the sadness is so real as well
very fine work to take the reader into a child's childhood home and dreams so vividly with your word imagery and your excellent expression of feelings and emotions
I know that the child in us loses the exuberance for the magical things but it is certainly replaced with the sublime
the little character in yiur story is so very real and endearing
blessings
have a smiley day
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review. You have a lovely day too.
Comment from aryr
First Maria I absolutely adored the picture you started out with; it was one that I had seen at several friends home and I thought the same when I saw it in reality, so for you to use it was great. Second I really enjoyed the way you presented your poem, which provided such fantastic memories as it was being read, great job, thanks.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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First Maria I absolutely adored the picture you started out with; it was one that I had seen at several friends home and I thought the same when I saw it in reality, so for you to use it was great. Second I really enjoyed the way you presented your poem, which provided such fantastic memories as it was being read, great job, thanks.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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The little figures are similar to the ones I used to have as a child and to the ones I have now and I have to say I love them.
Thanks for your review.
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You are very welcome, I think they are adorable.
Comment from patcelaw
Christmases for me as a child really left no lasting impressions. About I ever go to Christmas was a stocking with and orange and apple and some nuts in their shells. Patricia
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Christmases for me as a child really left no lasting impressions. About I ever go to Christmas was a stocking with and orange and apple and some nuts in their shells. Patricia
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thanks for sharing and for telling me about your own memories, even if you don't have too many.
