Painless
A six-word story.24 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Maria Jose Garcia, this is an upsetting poem written in only six words. I had to read it more than once to appreciate its deeper meaning. It is factual with what is happening to women all around the world, it is sad and it is certainly thought provoking. Well done on writing on this important topic. ~DD
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Maria Jose Garcia, this is an upsetting poem written in only six words. I had to read it more than once to appreciate its deeper meaning. It is factual with what is happening to women all around the world, it is sad and it is certainly thought provoking. Well done on writing on this important topic. ~DD
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Mimi Linny
Such a sad way to obtain your freedom... Very well conceived, you've done a great job of putting a full story into only 6 small words. Much luck in the 6-Word Writing Event.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Such a sad way to obtain your freedom... Very well conceived, you've done a great job of putting a full story into only 6 small words. Much luck in the 6-Word Writing Event.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading. Have a nice day.
Comment from smileycloud
I see that it is posted as fiction
but
it is the saddest thing that in real life for so many hurt and abused people;- your poem is the bottom line truth
well written
good 6 liner
such a powerful message os compassion and heartbreak in so few words
blessings
have a smiley day
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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I see that it is posted as fiction
but
it is the saddest thing that in real life for so many hurt and abused people;- your poem is the bottom line truth
well written
good 6 liner
such a powerful message os compassion and heartbreak in so few words
blessings
have a smiley day
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Luckily for me this is fiction. My husband is a loving and gentle man. For many others, however, it is real.
Thanks so much for reading and for your kind words.
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yes
we are very blessed people indeed
::))
Comment from michaelcahill
Wow. We posted at exactly the same time, Maria.
This is powerful and on the money. So thought provoking and poignant. This is truly a story and it is EASY for the reader to fill in the blanks. Indeed, it's maybe stronger than a longer piece would be in its impact. This is a good idea for us.
Well done. mike
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Wow. We posted at exactly the same time, Maria.
This is powerful and on the money. So thought provoking and poignant. This is truly a story and it is EASY for the reader to fill in the blanks. Indeed, it's maybe stronger than a longer piece would be in its impact. This is a good idea for us.
Well done. mike
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your review and for the glowing stars. I never feel happy when I finish writing one of these short pieces, there are so many things left unsaid...
I just reviewed your piece myself, talk about synchronicity.
