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haiku (bright colors at dawn)

haiku

3 total reviews 
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hello, my friend,

Beautiful haiku about nature. Your lines one and two connect grammatically and the satori line is a simple observation....very nice.

I am closing my account so this will be my last review, my friend. Take care.

MariVal

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
    Thank you for your kind words, and we will have fond memories of you.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Excellent
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A nice Haiku poem with a beautiful picture posted with it.
Very nice. Much said in so very few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
    Thank you for your review.

    FanArtReview.com has very many excellent pictures to share.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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You paint a picture here of corn fields reflected in the clouds? Sun beams like search lights golden and sunny. Food for thought here and great art work, a joy to read, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
    Thank you for your review.