haiku (bright colors at dawn)
haiku3 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful haiku about nature. Your lines one and two connect grammatically and the satori line is a simple observation....very nice.
I am closing my account so this will be my last review, my friend. Take care.
MariVal
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful haiku about nature. Your lines one and two connect grammatically and the satori line is a simple observation....very nice.
I am closing my account so this will be my last review, my friend. Take care.
MariVal
Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your kind words, and we will have fond memories of you.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A nice Haiku poem with a beautiful picture posted with it.
Very nice. Much said in so very few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
A nice Haiku poem with a beautiful picture posted with it.
Very nice. Much said in so very few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your review.
FanArtReview.com has very many excellent pictures to share.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You paint a picture here of corn fields reflected in the clouds? Sun beams like search lights golden and sunny. Food for thought here and great art work, a joy to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
You paint a picture here of corn fields reflected in the clouds? Sun beams like search lights golden and sunny. Food for thought here and great art work, a joy to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your review.