I am OLD and TIRED.
An Acrostic.28 total reviews
Comment from MizKat
Hi robina1978,
I know what it's like to be old as have made it to eighty.
It wouldn't surprise me if I made it to eighty one.
God is the one who will keep helping me.
Kat
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
Hi robina1978,
I know what it's like to be old as have made it to eighty.
It wouldn't surprise me if I made it to eighty one.
God is the one who will keep helping me.
Kat
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely day, just before the weekend.
Comment from c_lucas
As the years fly by, the body gets older. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
As the years fly by, the body gets older. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely day, just before the weekend.
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You're welcome, Ine. Charlie
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That just about says it for me, too, Ine, what an excellent contest entry. I expect there are so many of us on here that are experiencing exactly what you are saying. Well done, my friend. Another lovely poem. Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
That just about says it for me, too, Ine, what an excellent contest entry. I expect there are so many of us on here that are experiencing exactly what you are saying. Well done, my friend. Another lovely poem. Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely day, just before the weekend.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a decent entry for YAY! I'm Getting Old writing prompt entry.
It is a tragic tale and one that is common, unfortunately.
Everybody, no-no, can acquire one - I don't know what this line means? What is the 'no-no'?
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
This is a decent entry for YAY! I'm Getting Old writing prompt entry.
It is a tragic tale and one that is common, unfortunately.
Everybody, no-no, can acquire one - I don't know what this line means? What is the 'no-no'?
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you so much for sharing your entry in the Aging poetry contest. Yes, it can either working our bodies beyond their limits or just illness that makes us feel old.
Well done, and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
Hi there;
Thank you so much for sharing your entry in the Aging poetry contest. Yes, it can either working our bodies beyond their limits or just illness that makes us feel old.
Well done, and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.
Comment from Ronni
Most definitely you've aced all the signs of aging, and indeed we do all get
older. Illness does affect aging considerably, as does a lot of stress and
worry over so many things going on in our lives. Some we can control,
some we cannot.
Being old and tired...is common...and everybody has to deal with it
in their own way. I am sure you will too. Good luck on contest entry.
Best wishes, Ronni
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
Most definitely you've aced all the signs of aging, and indeed we do all get
older. Illness does affect aging considerably, as does a lot of stress and
worry over so many things going on in our lives. Some we can control,
some we cannot.
Being old and tired...is common...and everybody has to deal with it
in their own way. I am sure you will too. Good luck on contest entry.
Best wishes, Ronni
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.
Comment from royowen
You've fulfilled all the requirements of the contest Ine. I'm getting on a bit, but you're right, I don't "feel" old, I guess because I'm not generally sick, I'm just very fortunate, as is my wife. Well done great write, good entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
You've fulfilled all the requirements of the contest Ine. I'm getting on a bit, but you're right, I don't "feel" old, I guess because I'm not generally sick, I'm just very fortunate, as is my wife. Well done great write, good entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.
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Well done
Comment from patcelaw
My body is telling me that i am getting old, but in my mind I am still young. I love being with children as they bring out the kid in this old frame. Blessings for a good week and enjoy life as much as you can as you age. Patricia
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
My body is telling me that i am getting old, but in my mind I am still young. I love being with children as they bring out the kid in this old frame. Blessings for a good week and enjoy life as much as you can as you age. Patricia
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.